anymore chapters to this story

I want more

I like the way that this story is going but there are some problems with it : its kinda cliche most of the time , there are some very noticable spelling mistakes , these are the only issues iv come across and would like to point them out to help improve this story

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It's clearly pronounced lena and one mistake is fine but more than once...

Omg that was crazy and really good lol still laughing and hope they Jude's ok omg I can't wait for the next chapter

Omg amazing loving this sorry please continue.

P.s. Not to Mean but here some constructive criticism you to go over the sorry and check for miss spelled thing and gammar there where a few error in it.

But. It was amazing other whys I can't wait for the next chapter you are making it sound really good

I think the plot of this story is good, although the spelling and grammar needs some work. The way that it has been written at the moment makes it hard to follow. For each point of view in the story, it would be best to talk as that person in 1st person ( E.g. It's been a couple of weeks since Connor moved away and I've had to go on without him) , at the moment it is a bit confusing and more of a commentary on what is happening rather than a point of view.
Overall I think the story is good though

Plz update
I luv this fic

So first it's a good plot but you need to fix your spelling and grammar mistakes if you are doing it from Jude's POV it should be like -Taylor gave me a paper towel.- I'm just saying and at the part where those kids beat Jude up you have Jude's name like 5 times in one sentence

Hello, how are u ?
I just want to say that your fic his so cool :) And I wantes to know if You continu ? Or if it's one chapter ?
Sorry if my English is not so good, but I'm french actually 'nd I'm not so good in This language ;)
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