aaaand cliffhanger. i likely definitely following the story

nothing can beat the crystal gems and Im sure nothing can beat Rose and in this case her son, you Steven are strong as a diamond dont be afraid

I will quote Rose "take care of them Steven"

What a twist! I was not expecting that! This is so cool!

Did NOT expect that! Such an interesting concept omg I love it!

Wow that was a twist update soon

Woah. . .this is intense. I'm just wondering how Amethyst made all of that. So many details. . .wow. So. . .Stevens' been in a simulator his whole life? What about food? For how long has this been happening? Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

Oh My God you cruel cruel person. You can't end on a cliffhanger like that! I'm going to die while I wait for then next chapter! Update this ASAP! I love it so much! Great job xx

whoo! I'm excited to see where this'll be going. sorry I had to leave so suddenly last night, though

This is amazing. It really hits hard with the emotions. I love your descriptions. And your grammar is almost perfect too! That, my friend, can be quite rare on this site. :p Anyway, I look forward to more.

MORE NOW. Please?

Oh wow this first chapter was intense update soon. I want to know if Steven will be able to apologize to garnet and find out this dark secret

Woah. . . .whatever "weird dream" you had, I approve. This looks exceedingly promising and I can't wait to see more. l :-D Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

So good! Please, please, make more as soon as you can!