Reviews for His Persephone
bashfullygrumpy chapter 33 . 7/1
Breathtaking and absolutely riveting ! It’s very rare that you stumble upon a fanfic as extraordinary as this. I’ve cherished each and every moment of reading this story. Unlike a few other authors, you don’t try to lessen the blow of Tom’s true character. He is evil. Period. And you have captured and portrayed Dumbledore’s personality so well ! He is not some kind of a saint but is a very complex person. I absolutely adore Hermione’s badass attitude. I do hope you update soon because the suspense will probably kill me. Your story is honestly my saving grace during this bloody lockdown.
PS- I normally wait till the story is complete before adding it to Favourites but...ughhh OH MY GOD ! I AM IN LOVE !
Alaine chapter 18 . 6/30
I loved that line about Lord Voldemort being a boring boyfriend.. such a shame
Miss C Riddle chapter 33 . 5/20
What an intense and thrilling read! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! I am awed by the complex storyline you have concocted, and look forward to seeing how things develop with Hermione’s prosthetic and new distrust for Dumbledore bearing in mind her unbreakable vow, and what Tom will do if he joins the Aurors, how it will affect the timeline.
Thank you.
greymae chapter 33 . 5/10
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I love your writing, and the courses you chose with your story. So many people try to balance the monster and the man that is Tom Riddle, and end up romanticizing it all. I love that your story expertly balances both, without devolving into senseless violence and gore. Tom Riddle was cunning, but not infallible, and people seem to forget that. Your Tom has brilliantly crafted lies and plans, without crossing into Gary Sue territory.
Guest chapter 33 . 5/9
You left me with no words
Amazing
Guest chapter 33 . 5/9
You left me with no words
Amazing
Lily Narcissa chapter 33 . 5/4
A-mazing. I just finished the 4-chapter long battle. I'm breathless. I started this story 3 days ago and I was only living for it XD Days and nights, every time I could, I was taking my phone and reading the next chapter, not sleeping at night.
Bxbbie chapter 33 . 5/3
Oh updateeeeee
Lily Narcissa chapter 3 . 5/2
Hello ! I just started reading your story and it's very good ! just a question, how is Hermione when she start Hogwarts again ? She was previously 21. She still has cropped hair, and scars, but did she de-aged ? how old does she look ?
InsomniacReader1991 chapter 33 . 4/25
I love how you’ve made them vulnerable. It makes it more real and I can see this having impacts on Hermione. This is so well written!
JD SPARKS chapter 33 . 4/24
omg caught up. wow, I didn't know where you would take the leg plot. the while time when it happened I kept arguing with myself about the extent of magics abilities. I was like they can reattach right? or regrow a limb right? I was not expecting her to still be down a leg for the rest of the story! that is crazy! another great chapter though
excited for what all Dumbledore has to say and also for her and Tom to finally reunite!
JD SPARKS chapter 32 . 4/23
Whoa. I don't want to spoil things on the review section but whoa. Amazing job with the epic wizards duel. I wasn't expecting the ending at all!
JD SPARKS chapter 31 . 4/22
omg. Dolohov wow, you went there. Bravo... I was hoping for something to happen to him, that was probabaly much worse than what I imagined would happen. I also have to just say, having Hermione have to Avada him as a mercy kill, what an awesome way to kind of have her slide further down that slippery slope. Can't wait for the next part!
Shelby Carrizales chapter 33 . 4/21
Man, feels like it's been so long since you updated. I had to reread the whole thing to remember what was going on. Wasn't a bad decision, reminded me of why I picked it up in the first place. Keep up the good work! I look forward to the next update!
JD SPARKS chapter 30 . 4/21
okay now officially caught up to where I left off a couple years ago. I forgot Dumbledore was riding her Thestral, so cool, patronus after them. Excited to get to the latest updates, and again have to compliment your action writing is so intense. I love the battle sequence.. and it's not over haha.
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