| Reviews for Pink |
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   Sophisticated Sage chapter 1 . 5/16 Jaune is such a wonderful team leader, taking care of Pyrrah like that :P |
| 246vili chapter 1 . 6/4/2019 Some reviewer already wrote he/she tried this fic out after reading "Silver". I'm the same. This is a quite realistic pace for their relationship to develop based on their personalities. Actually the way things go in "Silver" after chapter 23, I can actually imagine them eventually getting together-together as Nora would say. You know, Jaune realising how important Pyrrha is to him after almost losing her and all the fluff, hugs and kisses can develop from there. |
| CrazyLich79 chapter 1 . 10/26/2018 It's good. |
| Grademaster chapter 1 . 5/30/2018 I like this. Don't know how to write arkos my ass. |
| G-Unot chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 Nice work, I read Silver first and then moved onto your other stories including this one. This is definitely a realistic perspective on how an Arkos relationship could properly eventuate (instead of the last minute kiss that we got in canon). Maybe one day after you're done with Silver, think about writing a full-length Arkos, you've got a knack for it. |
| Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 1 . 12/4/2016 You call this no idea. You did a good job. I read a ton of Arkos fics and this is one of the best out here. The extra adding was just good and how Pyrrha reacted later one was even better. Good luck with more. Saluut. |
| fireflame789 chapter 1 . 8/1/2016 "I have no idea how to write a RWBY Arkos story. I'm new here." Uh, I want to call bull. That was amazing; cutest and best arkos ship I've seen in a long time. Great job on keeping the dorkiness of Jaune and Pyrrha's personality in check. Fantastic job on getting each and every scene meaningful and linked while also throwing in a new emotion into the mix. Hub, so you are fairly new to the whole writing thing (not as new as me, but close enough). Well, great wrok. Keep writing, and I'll write alongside you! |
| Nexus Bladeguard chapter 1 . 7/28/2016 Its damn good is what this is |
| Bookfisher chapter 1 . 7/20/2016 Oh Jaune you clueless loveable idiot, this was amazing |
| csad21 chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 D'awwww... So adorable! :) |
| review lord chapter 1 . 3/18/2016 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this was freaking adorable! |
| Softballcatcher2 chapter 1 . 3/7/2016 Well I think it's amazing and that you should continue this story. You had me laughing and smiling throughout, so thank you and please keep writing! |
| SlayerOfTears chapter 1 . 2/28/2016 This was a nice oneshot, very heartwarming. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2016 Beautiful |
| FlameDragon14 chapter 1 . 2/16/2016 This was absolutely adorable. Please make more. |
