Reviews for The First Lady
KelseyNicole08 chapter 47 . 8/2/2017
I am so sad this is over. It was lovely. ️
AshleyStewart09 chapter 47 . 10/25/2016
I loved this story and am also sad it is over. I kinda wonder what happened to Ben. This is by far one of my favorites. Thank you for the time you took to write it.
BassCharlie-SparrowHawke chapter 47 . 10/20/2016
That was simply amazing. It seems so strange for this to be the end. I have enjoyed reading this so much, and I am so grateful for all the truly wonderful Charloe fan fic you have given us.
Your final chapter was a perfect way to bring this beautiful story to an end by letting us know that it was actually not an end, but a family getting ready to rebuild and be stronger and better than before. I loved the bond the group always had to each other , and then to also bring Danny and Aaron into their family with open arms was great.

I really can't express how much I love this story, and now that it is complete I think I will go back to the beginning and enjoy it all over again.

I too hope that one day you will come back to finish...but until then have fun!
Thank you for sharing so much of your time with this fandom...Your Revolution/Charloe friend
Michelle
haze47 chapter 47 . 10/18/2016
So sad this is over. I loved everything about this story. I'm sure I'll still read it again every once in a while.
LemonSupreme chapter 47 . 10/18/2016
Bravo! I am so very happy that you gave us this lovely story. It was wonderful from the very beginning and then you really outdid yourself here at the end - and I'm not just saying that b/c you killed Rachel. **giggles** Although...that was a pretty nice twist. I'm glad Duncan is no longer a threat, that baby Simon is safe and sound (as are his proud parents). I love that Danny and Jason were there to help Charlie (and Maggie and Nora and Miles and etc) The end is so hopeful which is really wonderful. I love Charlie's strength and her heart here.

So, after baby Simon and RIP Rachel, my favorite part was this tiny little bit. It was so perfect...

"Don't let go," Charlie whispers.
Danny shakes his head and smiles. "Never."

Crap. Now I'm going to cry. :) Thanks again for a wonderful story. You rock. -Lemon
Hayj chapter 47 . 10/18/2016
What a great ending, love! You had me sniffling and smiling all over the place. Thank you so much for this story. It was wonderful!
redbanker chapter 47 . 10/18/2016
OMG! What a perfect ending. I loved it so much. Spot on as always.
Kelly chapter 46 . 10/5/2016
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
BassCharlie-SparrowHawke chapter 46 . 10/2/2016
As sad as I am to hear that we won't get to enjoy your wonderful talent I understand life gets hard. I am really glad that you will finish "The First Lady" and I selfishly hope that someday you will find the time and energy to finish up "New name, Old games", but 1st things 1st...

What a wonderful chapter. I love how Charlie is trying so hard not to have this baby without Bass being there I also like that she has went to the library...I had a feeling that the man might be Aaron, but I wasn't sure. I am so happy that I was right, and him being the savior just seemed right.
Duncan is pretty delusional if she really thought that she could step into to Bass' life after she got rid of Charlie.

I seriously enjoyed this chapter alot. Everyone is trying so hard to get to either get back home or protect their home. Nora is awesome and Jason...I have always loved how you managed to make me love and care about all of them even the Neville's. You have created such a truly wonderful story, and I can't wait to see what you have planned for an ending to this .

Thank you for sharing so much of your time and energy, and of course your talent.
AshleyStewart09 chapter 46 . 9/29/2016
This was so good I understand you being busy. (Make sure you take time for you too.) Just love this story and am debating about rereading it when I have time
Hayj chapter 46 . 9/28/2016
*hugs* Of course we understand, love. Take care of you and yours and we'll be here waiting if/when you make it back. And might I just say *headdesk* How did I not see that it was Aaron?!
redbanker chapter 46 . 9/27/2016
Don't kill yourself then you won't be able to write at all! As always I love this story and your characters and can't wait for more.
LemonSupreme chapter 45 . 8/28/2016
A lot of tension in this chapter! Hating Duncan more and more as I read. :) This continues to be a wonderful story and I'm so glad you are still updating it. -Lemon
hayj chapter 45 . 8/27/2016
I'm so sad to know it's ending soon, but what a ride!
lmreese1997 chapter 45 . 8/26/2016
I've been reading this on the app and it kept telling me you uploaded a new chapter but there was NEVER a new chapter. The suspense had been killing me, but it was work the wait. I cannot wait for the rest of this story but I also don't want it to end.
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