Terrific job on this.

LuVvvvv this

Yes! I've always thought that about Loki too, because when he's running from Thor or his friends, I feel like he'd always help the commoners even if he'd get in trouble. And you cannot tell me that Loki isn't an EXTREMELY generous tipper.

Oh shoot, this it 27 and it's over so 28. There are 31 chapters!

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As Loki turned away, Thor come uld have sworn he saw Loki's eyes flash an

And thus a new ship was born! Evki

This makes me sad, but I love it. Someone help my brain hole!

Anxiety is my specialty! I wake up and-BAMN! It all up in this buissness! You write this shit man! Props to you! (This is a posotive comment i cann everything shit s9 dont take it as an insult plz!)

Really like the Loki-Odin moment. It makes me like Odin better, in general.

Love this chapter so much. Honestly had me somewhere between grinning like a fool and wanting to weep like a child. The bond between Loki and Frigga is so perfect. I really like how you included the small "fight" between them... it just makes their relationship so much more realistic.

I really like how you wrote Loki as genderfluid. Not only does it fit who he is (based on comics, movies, mythology, whatever), but it is also nice to see more characters that positively represent the LGBTQ community... even if it can only be found through fanfiction ( :
Keep up the awesomeness!

I love how you explained more about the Jotun, not only in this chapter, but also throughout the entire story. Everything is well-introduced to the story, no matter what it is.

I like the OCs, especially the small blue bean child

It's really interesting seeing what Odin's thinking, it's the first time he's ever made sense to me