It was an awesome one-shot. You showed me that there is more to Apollo than what meets the eye...

i always thought apollo was underappreciated

Great job on this, I loved it!

Kinda ironic how you called us tear droplets, because I'm pretty sure tears were calling from our eyes. This was beautifully written and just godsdam amazing.

Why do I get the feeling that the last line had a double meaning? Wow, that was great, I loved how you actually mentioned that secretly Apollo and Artemis love each other.

Exactly, why?! I readbir before going to sleep and today when I open the app it was still there so I re-read it and I was like 'Auch!'
Okay, that was cruel, but also nice, in an angst kind of way. I loved the two paragraphs when you talked about Artemis and Apollo.
So, I was thinking, could you please write a story in which Artemis and Apollo really care for each other and act like real siblings? Maybe one of those nights you talk about? I'd really love it!
Anyways, as I already read some of your sad/angsty/nice stories I officially give you permission to hurt my heart! ;) Keep up the good work!

keep going I like hearing his thoughts.

Wow, simply WOW. I loved it! It was so chilling and warming at the same time! I like how you portray Artemis and Apollo's relationship. This gave me chills! Greatly done! I also liked the theme of mystery and how they're alot more than what meets the eye. Beautiful :)

That's so cool! I love it, no one really gives Apollo a second thought, and everyone forgets all the things he's the god of. This is a really good idea, I love it!
~myaw .

No one ever gets Apollo, huh? God of poetry, implying quiet introspection. God of the sun, which can rage and burn as well as providing heat and warmth. God of prophecies, bringing glimpses of the future, of destiny. Has it ever ocurred to anyone that, like Chiron, Apollo has seen his own share of heroes never come back? Of COURSE not. Because he's Apollo. Immature Apollo who knows nothing, who cares about even less. Someday, the world will figure out how wrong it is. Someday.

Amazing story! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

I really liked this, it'd make a good story!

Dear NoTearsFalling:

Didn't Joe Nichols do a song about this?

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Love it! :) I always have wondered if Apollo and Artemis fell the same way as the moon and sun.