I just got through reading this again and I just absolutely love this story! Much love and thank you so much for sharing!

Only recently found this story. Loved it! So glad Tony got his happy ending and that he took Tim along for the ride.

What a fantastic story...I lost myself in it. I believe in angels, too! Please think abt writing more.

What a fantastic story...I lost myself in it. I believe in angels, too! Please think abt writing more.

I just fiinished reading this through a second time and i think it just might be one of my all time favorite stories. The characters were fantastic and the ending just wonderul! Thank you for such a fantastic story

WOW - AU to the max! Wonderful story. Plausible scenarios. Thanks for all of your hard work writing this one! I enjoyed it tremendously.

Breathtakingly beautiful and a complete joy to read, thank you for sharing your time and talent.

I enjoyed this story thoroughly. Thank you for sharing.

Loved this story, so glad he decided to go back!

Thanks for taking us along on this journey of Tony's alternate life, I love the way you write. The epilogue was heartwarming to see how the two little ones grow up and find forever love. Look forward to more stories from you (Tim's my fave).

Wonderful. I'm going over to AO3 so I can download this in its entirety and keep it on my e-reader.

I love the meeting between Tim and Tony, but I love the meeting between Matty and Riley even more. He doesn't know it yet, but Matty has just become Riley's slave. The description of Riley slithering under the hedge is perfect, setting the stage for the future of the DiNozzos and McGees.

loved it, loved it, loved it.

Hey, unilocular, after months, we are finally at the end of the epilogue.. This is such a bittersweet moment. I enjoyed every chapter of this story, I can't believe you managed to finish this despite your cutie pie baby ! Thanks for the clarification concerning Gibbs's situation, but I thought that he would be less grumpy with his family alive :) .. I guess that Tony kept Tim with him to prevent them from having the accident which caused Delilah's paralysis. This seemed mostly a chapter about their kids.. Riley's attitude towards Matt at the beginning reminded me of Abby's towards Tim at the beginning of s2 right before they split, thankfully you made her come to her senses lol ! Phoebe's love for film(making?) seems to be coming from her dad too. I would expect the McGee's to have at least more more kid though. Take care, see you in your next story !

Thank-you for sharing this story with us. It was an exciting adventure. You had me anticipating each & every chapter. Through your vivid descriptions I could actually see every scene in my mind's eye. I went on this incredible journey right alongside Tony. Felt each bump, each emotion with him. You couldn't have told this story any better. I'm exhausted, emotionally spent... I'm done, but with a smile on my face. It surely was a "tale less ordinary".