I am a little confused did Natsu leave rouge unharmed or he crippled him an beat him to almost be a dead shadow dragon slayer, since Crystal was sad because her entire family was killed an think she don't deserve to be in FT guild with Natsu that practicaly down right just ask her to marry him in Dragon Terms but what I really want to know if did Natsu beat rouge to a inch of his life Natsu is way more powerfull than rouge he no match for the Son of Igneel. Keep the Good Work. Till the Next Update.

So Crystal is Kidnapped and everybody was blaming Natsu but now rouge and gray are after her they are gonna get murdered by Natsu overprotectiness over his Mate since their first Instincs are to defend and protect Their Mates. I hope that Natsu become very agressive, merciless and Brutal again rouge and gray one for hurting her and the other for wanting to separate her from him maybe not to kill gray but hurt him for interfering with Natsu relationship just had to wait see what happen and what Natsu do. Keep the Good Work. Until the New Chapter.

Damn this chapter almost make cry she a really hard life but why she don't seet with Natsu and both of then Talk about things so that can be resolved and their love can prosper into somenthing happy and their life together I hope she do not get hurt because Natsu is going in a Murdering and Destruction Rampage on anything and everything Well this story is good but it make me mad of how she had be treated in her life. Keep the Good Work. Until the Next Chapter.

I absolutely heart this fanfic! Please update soon! :D

I love the way her introduction to the guild is waking up from passing out. Great story! I like the way that people have cute nick-names. It really helps to comfortably immerse the reader in Crystal's life. Can't wait to read more!

I like where this is going things are going a little to quick. But the idea is a good one they be mate marks. Some fluff and Some more development. Other than that fav and follow. :-)

Well good job at least this Natsu is not too dense his Dragon instinc must be screaming to him to be with her i always wonder how much 2 mated Dragon Slayer will be protective and jealous of each other. Keep the great work continue thanks for the Praise but i am only a reader i had a lot of ideas but don't have what it take to write a FF. Like i said keep the great work see ya next Chapter.

Wow you are on fire and you create a sister for gray is she also fall in love with Natsu because that would be awesome because gray will be crazy that his sister fall for Natsu and in what arc this is happening anyway. This is very good and Natsu is starting to feel the call of his future mate.

Damn gajeel is evil and attack a women i hope Natsu kick is butt without mercy. Keep the great work see ya next chapter and what is the description of the girl

Wow NatsuxOc is intereasting. Keep the good work see ya next chapter