Omg this is so awesome plz continue!

So...I'm hoping that you continue this for descendants 2. Will you please (insert the cutest possible puppy dog eyes)? :) 3

Hey, you haven't updated in a while so I figured this story was abandoned. If it isn't, could you do that moment in the beginning when they're in the limo and they assume that it's a trap? That really stuck with me that the kids assumed that Auradon would rather send a suicide agent to off them than open the barrier and let them through with no strings attached.

wahh I wish you would continue this story!

aw i wish you'd come back! i love all of this insight!

maybe next, some ben and how he felt after he learned he was spelled? or how evie kinda led doug on in the first few minutes of the movie?

I'm really enjoying this series! I love the amount of thought you put into each chapter and it's such a pleasure to read

Jay is 18, Evie 17, Mal 16 and Carlos is 14. The reason Mal ended up the leader is because of who her mother is, Jay is her second in command. Hope this helps! FleckedWings90900

can you please do the look on mal's face when she says that she does not know what love feels like and what ben thinks of that?

I absolutely adore the enchanted lake scene with Ben and Mal! I love this story!and I always wondered what would happen if maleficent tried to burn Ben while everyone was frozen in that last scene to punish Mal...I also wonder how the descendants movie would change if Mal has inherited Maleficents wings... Back on topic, I always love the think about bens POV in the enchanted lake scene, realizing you had been spelled to love someone...I also love the Carlos meets Dude scene, it's AMAZING! So cute! I think, if Carlos is really that scared of dogs, he would have climed a higher tree though... Seriously, te one he climed wouldn't do anything to protect him against the "rabid pack animals known as dogs" acording to Cruella...please update soon! I love this story!

I think you need to do the scene where the kids talk to their parents through the TV. I think you could find a lot of material to work with.

Wow. I never thought of half of this stuff. I think it's super cool how you went through the movie to find this stuff. You have to admire somebody like that.

Biggest fan of Evie and Doug! I'm not a good writer, but I have so many ideas that I would love to share. I was thinking a piece about Evie loosing a friend from the aisle and Doug singing to her to make her feel better (see you again maybe), or a piece over Evie dealing with not feeling pretty enough, or maybe one about dopeys reaction to Evie. Anyway as keep writing!

Once again a stroke of genius! Seriously some of these I didnt even see and now that I read about them I'm like "oh yeahhhhh". So deep! But so meaningful! Love it!

Oh I really like that chapter! I liked how you talked about them returning to the island and how this is what they would face it was really cool.

Did anyone else notice the first thing they did was hug when they thought they were going to die? In the beginning, when they're diving off the isle, Mal throws herself into Evie, Evie hugs her, carlos throws himself into Jay, and Jay puts his arm around everyone's shoulder.