It is very rare to make me cry. But with this fanfiction... with this chapter alone, you have done it... congratulations

The letter made me cry, it sent a jolt down my back. but i found it somewhat fitting for the story.
I Enjoyed reading this fanfiction

Don’t worry. You’re not the only one on this site who has to deal with their life and forgets about their fic. So there’s no need to feel bad. After all, you DID wrote the promised ending now, so it’s not like you just abandoned it

Ah! This was exactly the ending I feared would come after it was revealed that Izaya would need a heart transplant T-T but I still hadn’t given up hope. Well, maybe the second ending will still have a happy ending for the two lovebirds. I’ll just have to wait and see.

Awww! It makes me sad that the story is nearing its end and it makes me even sadder that Shizu-chan had to learn about Izaya’s heart the hard way. Could it be that that those dreams Izaya had were memories of past lifes? That would be even sadder. Gosh! Two lovers never able to live in peace. I so hope that the two of them still have a happy end.

Man, poor Izaya. I wonder if he'll tell Shizu-chan about his heart and I have a slight fear about the outcome of this story. Since one of the genres is Drama.

Yaay! It's Shizaya! Shizaya! Want to read more.

Huh? HUH?! O.O TEN?! When did I miss nine? Shame on me.
But... Kyah! They smooched! They smooched! Love this fic! Yaay!

Why did mairu have to interrupt them? TT

Yes! They revealed their feelings to each other! It was bound to happen soon, but I'm so glad that its here now! I just love the way that Izaya confessed. It was a very wierd way, but probably the best and least frightening way. I know that I would probably have to do it that way. I also thought that it was kind of funnily annoying when Izayas sisters walked in on them just as they were starting to get somewhere. They were such cockblocks right then. I can't wait for the next chapter of this to be out, so that I can see what happens between them now!

YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER! I was really happy when I realized that you had updated. I really enjoy this story and want to see the ending. (and if it's not happy I will be VERY unhappy)
I enjoyed this chapter. This was a very interesting dream idea, and in the dream the legend was so sad, and so was the ending, where Shizuo just left so that hopefully bad things would not happen to both of them. I want more of this story, and to see how Izaya decides to prove his feelings toward Shizuo.

Ughh beautiful story but the ending~~~ :(
So that was their past?

It's getting heated now! I love this chapter because it's just temptation for more to come. I can't wait until you post the next chapter!

*gasp* How bold of Shizu-chan. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ah! Forbidden love... I love it