Reviews for Falling Through Time
cinderelladreaming chapter 13 . 7/21
I am sure this has been posted long back, but if you are planning on editing this, I am willing to beta this one. the grammar and spelling mistakes are making it difficult to understand the story.
Guest chapter 56 . 7/20
NYT best seller! Keep writing, please!
cinderelladreaming chapter 1 . 7/20
this starts wonderfully. your writing style is good, there are slight spelling mistakes which make it difficult to grasp the meaning of what's Written, initially
Annette11418 chapter 56 . 7/11
From beginning to end, this story was incredible! Who knew that falling under an avalanche could end up changing your entire future. Every chapter was thought out and well worded. I wish there was an epilogue but the 56 chapters make up for it
forevermagic chapter 56 . 7/11
I discovered this fic a few days ago and it's one of the few Fred/Hermione stories I've ever read. Not only have you completely converted me to the pairing but I truly loved this fic and devoured it well into the early hours when I definitely should have been sleeping. I have so much respect for the forethought you've put into this, as well as the dedication in finishing it over so many years. Hope you're keeping safe in the current situation and we have some more stories to look forward to in the future!
shipaycon chapter 10 . 6/22
yessss. Snape and Dumbledore were awful! I'm so glad you agree!
Iris chapter 47 . 6/17
How did Hermione open the locket without Parsletongue?
Guest chapter 56 . 6/17
Great story!
peggy77 chapter 3 . 6/9
Dumbledore didn't die because of the locker, he died because of the ring. Yes, he was weakened by trying to get the locker but he was already dying from a curse because he put the ring on. The one he found in the Gaunt's shack that had the resurrection stone in it.

Your last couple lines made me laugh.:)
peggy77 chapter 2 . 6/9
Aww, I got goosebumps from reading that last line.
peggy77 chapter 1 . 6/9
Very good start!
heaven's-myth chapter 56 . 5/31
wow! wonderful story ty for sharing
AliceMalefoy chapter 56 . 5/30
Fantastic story, the ending is really really good! I like how you write this chapterwe have the hope, the grief, the love... Gorgeous

I am so very happy is read your storyusually I avoid stories that are more than 220k words because I know I get bored easily. It was NOT the case here.

A wonderful trip in a alternative reality.

So, thank you, so very very much. And you can be very proud of your story, it's fabulous.

~ Alice
AliceMalefoy chapter 55 . 5/30
Perfect perfect perfect... Gosh, your story is SO great... only one more chapterI don't want to finiiiish haha
Thanks and see you in 20 min at the end of the story
AliceMalefoy chapter 54 . 5/29
2 chapters left and I just need to say that your story is incredible. The plot is right on spot, it actually follows canon very well and is detailed where it should be. Even considering its length, your story was not "too much".
And I absolutely love how you managed the romance here. I mean, you are clearly focusing on Fred and Hermione but there are SO MANY other things happening, and they are just as well written as the romantic parts.
I cannot wait to know how everything ends.
Thanks!Alice
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