| Reviews for An Alternate Future |
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   koseta.a chapter 5 . 7/22 Oh dear God if magic was used on an asari there would be a giant meatsplosion |
| deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 4 . 7/6 I love that Machina can have kids! |
| deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 3 . 7/6 I love the use of other charecters while still not making this a crossover(i love crossovers bit this is a mix of crossover and fusion which I dont Ive seen before) |
| deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 2 . 7/6 Ive been looking for OP Earth and adding Magic |
| stylo1 chapter 9 . 6/24 i am groot... really you had not ripped off enough different fics? story is far to short to be of any meaning, hell the parts you did write you mostly skipped past |
| stylo1 chapter 9 . 6/24 why would the quarrians have trouble with food? they lived for 300 years on their ships but suddenly surviving till next harvest on the planet is to much? |
| stylo1 chapter 8 . 6/24 why would you colonize in an area that basicly serves as a dmz and is connected to the batarians. this is another piece of you forcing your plot through action no sane nation would make. i read your profile and can i just say it is hillarious you complain about ppl not knowing the difference between english and american schooling. why? because your english spelling is lackluster at best the same goes for your vocabulaire, its a mircale your grammar is good. and 72 stories but almost all abandoned? te fuck |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 6/24 half of the things you pull straight out of your ass just to fit your story, which is ok seeing as this is fiction. however you should stick to the rules you set for your fiction. right now your rules are as follows; i will warp reality when i want to fit my plot. weapons that work one moment wont the next, some that look flashy but obviously wont work are still used to make a nice show. it is rather lacking |
| Rescue9911 chapter 1 . 6/23 The goblins should LOVE the Magic Plus Eezo equation |
| B317 chapter 9 . 4/2 please for the love of god continue this! |
| sugoijack9 chapter 4 . 4/2 I really want to punch this idiots faces of thinking the Machina as abomination. How dare they! |
| sugoijack9 chapter 3 . 4/2 Earth should not joined the Citadel. They should sense that something amidst about the Council and that they're nothing but a retarded governing bodies that only scavenge technology from a long dead advanced civilization instead advancing forward to their own. |
| B317 chapter 9 . 3/15 please for the love of shotguns continue! my God! |
| rankinstein41 chapter 9 . 9/29/2019 Do you ever plan on continuing this story? I just came across it and had a very enjoyable time reading it and am sad to see that there is not more. If you gave this story to someone else to continue can you point it out to me so I can continue reading. |
| amerdism chapter 9 . 6/27/2019 Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up? |
