Reviews for Strawberries On Top
Darkmaster006 chapter 5 . 9/9
A masterpiece 3.
Darkmaster006 chapter 2 . 9/8
I loved it! Ruby was sooo cute and energetic, omg, you did a great work. Also poor Weiss, didn't think she'd get knocked out like that. You go Ruby!
WhiteRosePlanter chapter 5 . 12/29/2019
Kawai!
This is too cute! I need more!
sacke110 chapter 5 . 7/30/2019
Lovely
RWBY FAN chapter 4 . 4/23/2019
This is such a sweet story (Sorry, punintentional) but I think what strikes me the most is Jauque Schnee's character. Is it accurate at all? No, and that is because this came out before season 4. Is it fun to see him portrayed as what is essentially Santa Clause? YES!
Yubella chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
weiss's father is so ooc
Anon chapter 4 . 12/19/2016
This looks like it was completed a while ago, but I just had to respond to your AN. I see your ice cream shop, and I raise you an ice cream SANDWICH shop. I don't know your locale, but shops specializing in cookies/ cookie ice cream sandwiches have become popular around where I am. I love this story, and pretty much all your works. Thanks for sharing!
TigerCritic chapter 5 . 9/3/2016
Oh My God. This is too cute for 4 o'clock in the morning. I'm like silently squealing.
GrnDrgnzrd chapter 5 . 6/5/2016
"I scream, you scream, we all scream for Weiss cream!"
"Yang, stop."
"Well, it was a "sweet" story!"
"Ugh."
Great, now I've got Yang in my head...
In all seriousness, loved every minute of reading this. My gem collection is growing. :)
Falneou17 chapter 5 . 3/31/2016
Aw, how precious! Ruby being all nervous and waking up very early on her first day. You and me both Blake… you and me both… they are as adorable as adorable can be! Yup, flustered girls are flustered. That's very thoughtful of you Weiss. Very thoughtful. Either that, or you just want to spend more time with Ruby. And then they go on an adorable double date… perfect!

I'm pretty sure that you're tired of me repeating the same word over and over again throughout all my reviews, but I'm afraid that I have to repeat it once more: this story was absolutely adorable! Thank you for writing and publishing it! I loved it!
Falneou17 chapter 4 . 3/31/2016
Well, I'm glad to see that both Weiss and Blake use the word "adorable" as well, because that is exactly what this story is: "adorable"! Yup, White Rose is as adorable as ever! It's really impressive that Weiss was able to come up with such a great plan under those circumstances; it's really hard to think clearly when under stress and this just shows how level-headed Weiss is. Alright, I need a thesaurus… but that will have to wait because that. is. ADORABLE! Though I can see it being a bit awkward, especially with it being in public like that as well as being in front of Weiss' father. With these kind of things, there will undoubtedly be some people who are making bets to some extent, though Sun does seem to fall under the receiving end of things… oh well, adorable White Rose is adorable! And yes, it would indeed be a great place for Ruby to both work and get a girlfriend. Thank you for this adorable chapter!
Falneou17 chapter 3 . 3/31/2016
First of all, I'm glad that you decided to add more to this amazing story! Thank you! Secondly, it's adorable (I use that word too much now XD) how Blake/Yang/Sun/Neptune reacted when they came back, especially when Weiss only knew the former three for five days. And it is already confirmed that Weiss likes Ruby; with Blake already teasing her about it. And it is heavily hinted that Ruby returns it, but then again, it is White Rose, so… yes, I'm saying "adorable" a lot lately, but THAT is adorable if I ever see anything adorable! Adorable! And what did Weiss' father say to Ruby? Oh well, I'll find out soon enough anyway.
Falneou17 chapter 2 . 3/31/2016
Aw, that's adorable! I know it is something that Ruby would do, but it doesn't make it any less adorable! Does it Rubes? Hm… to all their own I suppose… I really like this! Weiss may often be called an "ice princess", but she does care about others and that showed just that! Especially with that little piece where she specifically glanced back to make sure that Ruby would be safe. Way to go Weiss! Awww, just five days of knowing one another and already kissing?! Adorable! Oh come on Ruby! That was your big chance! Oh well, you'll get another chance for sure.
Falneou17 chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
I'm honestly intrigued by this chapter, especially with the theme of it being an ice cream store focused story; so many possible pathways that it could take. Regardless, Ruby's adorable and I'm loving the interactions involving Yang and Sun. Saturday night's going to be a turning point, I can feel it! I think what I enjoyed the most was that, with all the stories where Weiss has a bad relationship with her father, this one appears to be a really good one. Alright, next chapter!
python chapter 5 . 3/6/2016
Very cute! Good work!
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