Kind of convoluted and makes no sense. Why was Margery there? She had no reason to be in Winterfell or anything like that. Not without an honor guard and her father's permission.

The arguments made against the wall were also kind of hard to follow. Especially given how Northern they are. Making little sense argument wise for Robb and Jon.

Generally speaking this is sloppy.

I still don't understand what caused Bran to act the way he has towards his family. in the beginning I could see that the three eyed Raven was influencing him to be amenable to Joffrey in order to survive but I never saw the change in him to truly believe in Joffrey. If it was conveyed in an earlier chapter I must have missed it but I cannot make sense of Bran whatsoever. Other than that, great story.

Thank you! Thank you for acknowledging Stannis abandoned Renly. People are always like "Stannis was so good to Renly yet Renly betrayed him" yeah right

I'm at ch. 7, and so far it's one of the better fanfics i've read. I simply loved that pink floyd reference at the beginning of ch.7!

Heil Joffrey. Death to the Young Wolf!

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

what the fuck is all I can say

If you really killed Arya, off-screen like that its pretty stupid, first off we can't trust the guy who brought the message of her death, and Tywin must have been suspicious as well since he ordered the body destroyed, I hope she is still out there otherwise you have gotten ridden of a great character for no reason in a horrible fashion and it makes no sense

Gd

very good job. look forward to reading more of your work.

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Nice Chapter

So is there going to be a sequel? This ended in a manner that makes me think so. I think Bran being so bi-polar here shows that his actions and thoughts were not his own. I think that things were still left open here and begs for it to be given more closure. The chapter was good in wrapping up the fact that KL is no longer the capital but what will Robb do from here.

Good work.

Well she sure showed that she might not have been a Targaryen but had the madness that could have been a sign if she were. I think her taking her innocent children with her was sad but I think her own vanity is what led her down this path. She could have given up with out resorting to what she did. Myrcella I would have thought would have tried to talk Cersei out of whatever she was doing or possibly ran when her mother slapped her. Knowing Sansa as she did I would have thought that she would have said something about her not thinking that would happen. Cersei sure went mad there though. And Baelish getting what he deserved was alright.

What I expected for cersei she's pretty Cray Cray haha