dude seriously, write another chapter, i want to see how this ends

Pls update this I love it

WHAT?! You can’t just end it like that. You have to update. You can’t just leave her dead. Please please please update soon

please update soon

Beautifdul story! I do hope another chapter will be uploaded soon. I'm anxious to know what events turn up.

I love this story so much... Please update in the best conveniences! I wish you the best as well.

I hope you didn't forget about this story, it's such a good story it'll be a shame if you didn't finish it

I absolutely love reading this story, the plot and writing format is exquisite. Please update your story soon because I would love to continue reading this drama and figure out how this story ends. _

OK, first of all OH MY GOOOOOD! I've read some TT fanfics and none of them were as satisfying or as interesting as this one, so congratulations on the story! There are some misspelled words and some times it makes it difficult to read (cause English is not my first language) but still it's nothing that can't be fixed. And as for the end of chapter 15: my poor babies bring them back together T_T. But seriously is a great story you are writing and I'm looking foward for the next chapter, that hopefully comes soon. GREAT WORK AND KEEP GOING! (;

Just some constructive criticism on this story as a whole:

-Proofread more. That's probably the biggest issue here. There are lots of misspelled words, your/you're mixups, verb-tense disagreements, and incorrect words that just sound kind of similar to the word you were probably going for (like "feudal" where I assume you meant "futile"). Another big thing is contractions- Starfire/Kori NEVER uses contractions, so unless another character is speaking/narrating, you shouldn't either. Honestly, I've seen far worse grammar on this site, but I just think this story deserves better.

-While this is overall a pretty good AU, I'm not a huuuuge fan of how you translated Kori's backstory from the original, especially since you're kind of inconsistent with how much she knows about her heritage (In ch.1 she said she didn't know where she was from- when exactly did she find out? If she doesn't know anything about Tamaranian culture, why can she speak their native language?). And if she's lived in the U.S. for most of her life, why would she still have trouble understanding idiomatic expressions? I feel like there are some logical issues here that could be addressed with some pretty minor tweaks to her backstory.

-Since I'm not really an expert on DCU characters, I was occasionally a little confused as to which superhero/villain various characters were supposed to be adaptations of (For example, I can't figure out for the life of me who Babs is based on.) If you added a short a/n at the end of each chapter clarifying who's who, that would be really helpful. Just a suggestion though.

-Kurt Vonnegut once said, "Be a sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them in order that the reader may see what they are made of." I. LOVE. That you're so willing to be a sadist. But at times, it feels a little bit... forced, I guess? Like you're just doing it to do it, and not to advance the plot or develop the characters. I'm not saying you should tone it down, per se, just maybe exercise a little bit more restraint. Like some of the stuff with her dad seems kinda excessive. He didn't have to be a murdering psychopath for Kori to have a rough home life, he could have just been an uncaring drunk who smacked her around. Sure, it's less dramatic, but it's more believable.

-In particular, I want to point out chapter 13. I feel like Kori, who has presumably had to deal with years of emotional and sexual abuse, would have more than a few issues with intimacy. It's not hard to imagine the sexy stuff leading to Kori having a flashback to previous traumas, forcing her to open up to Dick about her past and voila, feelsy character-building moment! Plus, then the fairy-tale ending that scene wound up feeling like could come after Kori's dad was locked up/dead, and all was well.

Really though, despite the massive wall of text I just wrote criticizing your writing, I really like this story- it's total pulpy goodness. I love the rags-to-riches aspect of it, and all the stuff with Kori and Dick is very sweet and an absolute joy to read. I hope to see it updated again soon!

OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Please don't do this to ME!

Thanks for the new chapters and the new plot twist and OMG NO STARFIREEEEEEEEEEEE

OH GOD, WHY!YOU MADE ME CRYY!WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

Wow that was wow! That was so good and u just captured it al so well and I like don't have anymore words other than it gave me tingles! Can't wait for the next update!

Thanks for the new chapter it's so cute how they react around each other and can't wait to see the drama unfold