loved the montage, loving the plot and can't wait for the next chapter

Sorry but I can't see the Avatar coming anywhere close to the power of the Sage of Six Paths so he will be to weak to fight the bad guys in the future.

can't you add Ino and Karin al haren too please

A really good chapter my friend :)

I really love, you gave him the glider.

Love the story so far and honestly love the last part on how he grew up more and graduated, haven't scene that much in any story I've read about Naruto.

Aw man I was hoping ino would be there to see how creative you can in adding her. She wasted as a fangirl and I wanted to see if you could expand their mind voodoo in action.

I hope you made Haku as a female character because I personally like that if the author's going to do

harem stuff with Naruto with Haku as a member. And I have no problem if you're going to make

Naruto as an OP because I like OP and have seen many of protagonists in manhua as overpowered

characters. But to do that, you have to make a lot of his enemies as a bunch of jerks who think

they're above everyone else and can do whatever they pleased to anyone just because they're strong

and they are from powerful families. Now, that would be a good reason to make Naruto as an OP

because only the overpowered protagonists can make the people like them crawl and whine like

worthless worms they actually are. And regarding the geography of Naruto, I believed it is merely

just a peninsula located on the eastern continent that used to be called the Earth Kingdom.

That could work because I've studied the map of the Avatar world and found that there is a peninsula

located at the southeast of the Si Wong Desert and the peninsula itself is blocked by the mountains

that separate it from the desert. So I have a theory that the Si Wong Desert is sort of connected

to the Demon Desert of the Land of Wind similar to how the Sahara Desert is connected with

the Arabian Desert in our world. Speaking of the Avatar world, what happened to the places like

Ba Sing Se, Omashu, Yu Dao, the Foggy Swamp, the Air Temples, and Northern Water Tribe?

Some of these places cannot just disappeared. Ba Sing Se and Omashu are massive and heavily

fortified cities while the Air Temples can stand for a century without the proper maintenance.

As for the Foggy Swamp, there is no doubt that it would still be around. But what about the places

like Yu Dao and the Northern Water Tribe? Are they still existing after Avatar Aang gone? And if

the ninjas and samurais are limited to just the peninsula, what are the combat occupations of

the rest of the world? Are there still benders around by that time? Or are they being replaced

by something new like the cultivators and hwarang? By the way, are the hybrid animals like

platypus bears and komodo rhinos are still around? One more thing, I have some ideas I would

like to offer to your story.

1 The Order of the Red Lotus is responsible for the destruction of Uzushio and caused

the Uzumaki Clan to scattered because they feared of the ancient prophecy that the reincarnation

of the next Avatar will be born in the Uzumaki Clan and destroyed this ideal world full of freedom

of theirs. Some Uzumaki kinsmen may even got out of the peninsula into the Earth Kingdom.

2 Naruto used the idea of searching and reuniting his clan as the reason to travel around the world

to do his duty as the Avatar.

3 Vaatu is the secret de facto leader of the Order of the Red Lotus.

I hope you like my review ad the ideas I offered. If you have anything you would like to talk to me,

contact me via PM. Hope to see your next update soon! Good luck!

Awesome chapter man keep it up thanks.

Why would you make Garra a girl if she isn't in the harem?

nice and with phill Collins song,,,,,,, exquisite taste my good sir more of this delightful fic, my jolly good man

it was good but damn that song just made everything seems so childish haha... i just feelt that this was pg12 all of a sudden :P

I don't like naruto can easily destroy the avatar.

love it

Thanks for the awesome chapter.