| Reviews for Ash Screwup |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 9/3 Continue please |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/8 Bruh I love this team rocket |
 Ellenasganga091304 chapter 9 . 8/5 I love this story, if you could or want could you please continue it? This story is amazing. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/6 Crescent rose Ember celica Gamble shroud |
| Shadow Brockwell chapter 9 . 5/24 Great book please continue |
| FrostHunter chapter 9 . 3/27 It was simple mistake brock's dad had no way of knowing ash was frail. |
| FrostHunter chapter 8 . 3/27 Wonder what will happen next. |
| FrostHunter chapter 7 . 3/27 Five man band |
| FrostHunter chapter 6 . 3/27 James jessie meowth |
| FrostHunter chapter 5 . 3/27 Ok |
| FrostHunter chapter 4 . 3/27 Oh dear |
| FrostHunter chapter 3 . 3/27 Wow |
| FrostHunter chapter 2 . 3/27 Interesting |
| FrostHunter chapter 1 . 3/27 Ouch rough beginning but pikachu is listed in characters so will ash get another or will pikachu return? |
| KoriSeiyuri chapter 9 . 3/8 please continue |
