The first chapter was amazing I almost got emotional several times (love KisaIta!) I think CH. 2 did not upload right but CH. 1 was great.

Actions not allowed:

1. Multiple entries of the same material. There can only be one copy of any unique story on the entire site. No exceptions.
2. Rewriting names of characters/locations of one story in order to upload to multiple categories.
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

This story is not allowed under section 3.

Using song lyrics that you do not own are not allowed here because they contain copyrighted lyrics that you do not have the permission to reproduce.

You should try to at least write rework this (disclaimers don't cut it as the rules specifically say "no musical lyrics") so that it references the song (like it's playing on the radio in the background) instead of posting the lyrics to it. If you don't change then your story could be removed/deleted by the admins here.

Hope this helps.

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