I got an idea for you about how to de-isolate Earth and the Milky Way from the other galaxies, but it'll be a little crazy (and 100% non-canon), so here it is: While Jordan's out adventuring with Rachet and the others, scientists in a secret military base (like Area 51) are performing an experiment with an interdimensional gateway when they unknowingly open a portal to the dimension where the Lombax race are in. The gateway malfunctions and has a meltdown, causing multiple portals to the Lombax dimension to open all around the planet. What happens next is entirely up to you.

Your stories are awesome. Please keep writing.

Oh, and that idea you had about Jordan, Rachet, Clank, and Sophia crossing over with Bioshock is awesome. Which city would you have them go to if you go through with it, Rapture or Columbia? Either one sounds great, Rapture has the Splicers and the Big Daddies while Columbia has that racist government that'll try to kill anyone who's not like them as well as Handymen and Firemen. Personally, I'd go with Columbia because there's more guns and gear and I think you can occasionally swing from place to place as well as ride the many rails that run throughout the city in the sky. But it's really up to you, it's your story after all.

make a another story about ratchet and clank 3 and the rest okay man you are a good story writer

Or does Rachet or Nefarious or someone else create a device that allows travel between Earth and the Solona Galaxy. Maybe even have someone from Solona, Bogon, or Polaris "discover" the Milky Way Galaxy.

Just some other guesses. Nice cliffhanger at the end btw. Nice to now that a third adventure is possibly going to happen.

Judging by your reply, Jordan's comment about his hope that humans will develop intergalactic travel, and the "silhouettes" that Jordan thought were following him through the woods, I'm guessing that the U.S. Gov't had been watching Jordan since his last adventure ended. Meanwhile, scientists have a massive breakthrough in space travel that will allow for a ship to travel to and from another galaxy in a time ranging from a few days to a few hours.

Did I even hit the side of the barn with this guess?

Guess you can file this under complete.

I wonder how Jordan would react if Rachet, Clank, and Sophia were teleported to his home planet (Earth) in his galaxy (Milky Way) instead of the other way around.

If that ever happened, Rachet and Clank would find that Earth is very different from their galaxy. One such difference would be weapons. On Earth, their Quick-Select probably wouldn't work. Also, the ammunition their firearms use is unavailable on Earth, so (knowing how trigger happy Rachet is) they would burn through the ammo for their blasters pretty fast. Another thing about weapons and ammo would be that there are no vendors that sell weapons and ammo; in other words, you can't just buy guns and bullets at a gunshop like you can buy candy at a 7/11 (unless you buy it off the black market).

Speaking of buying stuff, NO ONE on modern-day Earth uses bolts as currency (an exception could be made for bolts made from precious metals however). I can actually see Rachet smashing a few crates only to find that the none of the bolts fly up to him.

Another thing would be enemies. Human hostiles, whenever they're criminal, police, insurgent, or soldier, would likely fight differently than the Blarg, Robots, and Thugs-4-Less.

It would be a tougher challenge for Jordan, that I am certain.

Great story by the way MedicineMan426, can't wait for the last chapter for Worlds Unite to see how Jordan gets home.

Soon Jordan will be facing against something more dangerous than a Blargian mogul and a mutant pet: a robot mad scientist named Dr. Nefarious. And his abused butler, Lawrence.

great chapter
really enjoyed reading the part with Jordan and Qwark inside the protopet.

another great page can't wait to read more.

"But I wish you actually mentioned about Jordan's still broken nose, and how the group got their weapons back.
I do realize they go to a vendor in this, but it's just for ammo and you didn't mention how they got their weapons
back, due to the fact that they were taken away on the prison ship. But I do forgive you for these mistakes..."
They are mistakes alright, but not my mistakes. I checked the document, and neither of these two cases were mentioned anywhere in the orignial document. My job is optimalizing the story, not writing it, that's YOUR job, not mine. I don't mind adding to the length of the chapter, but plot parts, like the group getting their weapons back, is up to you to mention in the story, I will not add plot parts, because that is not the job of a beta-reader, so may I ask why you blame me for this mistake? As far as I know, YOU are the writer of this story, not me, mentioning these seemingly important parts is your job, not mine. Your job is to tell the story, mine is to optimalize it, not add to the plot. So please, before sending me a beta-read chapter, make sure all plot parts are included.

Also, if I may ask, if you are not happy about this being forgotten, then why did you not add it to the chapter before posting it? You could even have sent me a PM about this forgotten plot part, and I would have added it for you. But I will not add story plot parts myself, that is the writer's job, not that of the beta reader.

But all that aside. I do wonder what's going on between Ratchet and Angela, even Jordan seemed to have noticed it. But that is something that will be uncovered in time. Anyhow, Smolg's next. I actually wonder what Smolg is. Is it a heavily clouded terrestrial world, or a gas giant? Judging by the scenery, I would guess a gas giant, but then what are the platforms built on?

glad your alright now also the chapter didn't seem short to me.
As i read the page i could picture every part in my head.
I also liked your All 4 One story as well as the bond between Jordan and Sophia was and still is awesome.
Also thank you for the comment.

Oh... you should have told me that you weren't really happy with the length, I'd have added some more content to the chapter. Oh well.

Ah, I can't wait for the moment they come face-to-face with... I won't spoil that part for those who don't know.

awesome page can't wait see the next page.

Great to see an update from you, sorry to hear you were sick with the flu and I know for a fact it's not fun being sick at all. Been inspired of doing my own Ratchet and Clank human adventure story but I just don't know where to set the first story line in, I'm divided between the first game or some time after the third game "Up Your Arsenal".

Anyways I do hope you get more reviews for your story as it's a very good one.