Very interesting story, hope to see future updates from you !

I like this chapter and this story seems Interesting.

I was hooked by the first three paragraphs. It seems like a lot darker tone than to say 'Relevations' or 'Little Moments', etc. and it'll be interesting to see how much humour there'll be in future chapters. Since it's cross-over between FFVII and FFXIII, I'm curious to see how it all plays out.

I reallllllly can't wait to read the second chapter, whenever that will be. But I'm definitely sure it'll be worth the wait. (But please update soon! *crosses fingers*) :)

Wow, I have loved your writing for a long time, super excited to see you doing a FFXIII/FFXII crossover can't wait to see how this turns out. Really hope this is another Snow/Lightning, love how you write them and there aren't enough fics about them out there. Can't wait for the next chapter.

love the start, can't wait to see more!

Hey! I really liked this chapter, the characterization of sephiroth and lightning was done really well! The writing itself is loads ahead of many stories posted on here, as well. I really can't say much right now in a review because honestly this prologue, well done really well, doesn't hint at much for the relationship of lightning with other characters or how close to 7 or 13 particularly you will stay. The only thing I wish I saw more in this chapter, was a more in-depth or possibly just touching on paol the two worlds of these separate games came together. The only thing I really know, is that health and cook soon still seem to be the planet? Obviously this will most likely be answered soon, but I'm not used to reading stories with only one chapter so it's weird to me not grasping the setting or crossover outside of characters that is. Basically though it was an amazing chapter and I look forward to reading more.

Keep up the good work!

Koby out

Oh yeah ! Whaow ! I already love it .Can't wait to see what 's next.

This is a very interesting start. I love both games and characters so I'm looking forward to seeing where this story will be going. Hope you update soon!

No warning! Why was I not alerted? Damn, now I'm beyond eager for more! Thank you, beyond words, for doing this story! My appreciation cannot be felt through words alone! So many exclamation points, but admittedly, I'm quite excited.