So, just from reading the first chapter, I'm noticing a lot more telling than showing. We're learning a lot more information than we immediately need to. It'd make sense if it was through Bell's perspective.

While I'm still liking the story so far and maybe that'd be fine for explaining the Makai Order, I feel we could have learned how Bell and Hestia met and the relationship they have through storytelling and not from the narrator.

Good work on this update. Though I may not have watch the movie, but I’ll check it out eventually.

i'm glad bell and aiz were able to have at least some kind of a conversation just to give her some piece of mind to know that he'll help her get some closure when he gets back

I like the adaptation of the movie for your Garo fic.

Nice! I love movie adaptations like this, I so can't wait to see the rest of this. Keep up the good work.

Tu historia es muy buena espero que la actualizes pronto.

Now that Danmachi has a season 2, will we be seeing a continuation soon?

I love your story bro please update soon

Thanks for this awesome chapter.

Lot of great fight scenes and all of them are intense. And finally Allison makes an appearance. So that means she's currently trapped in a dungeon. But at least we finallly see a potential female Knight. And at the same time, the plot moves on.

Will wait for the next chapter and also your other stories.

Alright very nice chapter you got here. Like the action in this and the fight as well, so Bell was able to access the power of the eye and was able to predict his opponents move that's was also nice there.

So Bell's mother is alive and for some reason she's not able to leave the Duegeon and can't make physical contact with her son, I wonder what that is about it? Oh well I'm sure we'll find out in the next chapter.

Anyhow good luck on your next update keep up the good work you're doing.

This chapter looks good so far especially with how you handle the fight scenes which are my favorites. I can't wait when Bell meet the female hooded once again.

Keep up the good work!

That was awesome

Hmm...This is pretty nice chapter. So Zaruba knows what happened to Bell's mother but won't say anything until he thinks he ready for it, I wonder how that will turn out.

The fight against Cinder is good, but I'm worried about Bete. Bell's power as a Makai Knight makes him feel weak in comparison. I mean, Bell has no level to begin with, so it just makes what Bete does to gain his current level to be small in comparison. Add the fact that Adventurers are powerless against Horrors without the right equipment, and I can see some jealousy grow into something ugly. Hell, if he tries to pick up Bell's sword...that will be embarassing.

I also had a filler chapter idea. You can adapt the other anime Garo's tales as stories from other times before the era Bell's story takes place in. You may need to do some creative changes, but there would be a lot of Garos and there are a lot of elements you can use to tell stories of Garo and other Makai Knights as well.

So, anyway, good job with character interaction and action. Hope to see more of GARO here. Take care now.

And maybe consider that 'cut off Bell's arm' idea later.

Loving the Aiz/Bell action