Seriously the end? I wonder will there be a part two. If so im looking forward to t. Great read and performance keep these kim possible fics more entertaining

This looks entertaining

Great story.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Easily one of your best stories. Love the interactions, character work, twists like the military goon actually being chipped, etc. Your team-up was my favourite though, been waiting for a fic where the car AI gets a body, Tweebs along, and of course Shego officially working with Kim. Plus ever since Rogue been curious as to what you would do next with the DC-verse

Wonderful!

Coming back a few years after I read I the first time, I just have to ask if you wrote some of these things to add depth to the story and characters!
I mean threatening people with bodily harm (or death) to keep them from seeking legal aid or report a crime. That's downright villainous, .

Hey um just for you should know you said the directors office was bugged by her SUPERIORS? You know she founded the company right?

Im still reading chapter four but lol this is near the beggining of the chapter ""Hey, at least a comet didn't blow up in your face," the woman shrugged, and grinned. "Now, get off my wing. I'm already late for my next appointment."," lol potential hint at your newest fanfic kim possible: gifted? LOL imagine if both the comet and this happenes O.O she would be o.p

Now that I'm finally finished with this, I can say I enjoyed it quite a bit. It feels like KiGo is end game here, but it's fairly subtle compared to other fics, even other fics you've written. Regardless, this deserves a sequel.

Okay, I get it. You want to work in the "Men cause all war and kick puppies and are the worst thing to ever happen" angle here, like you do in a lot of your stories (most notably "Kim Possible: Wonder Girl" and the "Dynasties" series) but come on. Batman going so far as to specify that Kim is a woman to push some weird feminist agenda is so out of character and grating to read.

I want to like your works, I really do. But can we stop with the man bashing or at least tone it down a bit?

The End?

Nope!

Not until Jack Hench is dead, and Electronique is reduced to scattered atoms.

Maybe not even then...

I would like Kim to have a daughter.

May I suggest Clea, one time student of Dr. Strange Sorcerer Supreme, as the other mother.
Magic will let them have the child.

Some are corrupted by power.
The love of money lures others to evil.
Paranoia can corrupt too.

Wade needs a girlfriend, I suggest Annie.
Together they can design and build a family.

Supergirl?
Ok...
Why not just have Kim ascend and become a GODDESS?