Reviews for Hollow Heroes |
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G-Sky chapter 4 . 7/13 I LoVe this! Why in the world did you drop it? Please continue... |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/26 Please continue this story. |
ElizabethBathog chapter 4 . 5/19/2019 Awesome work on this and I hope you will update this someday but thank you for writing it! |
SilentProwler chapter 4 . 2/1/2018 Ooh, wonder when Tadashi will question why Hiiro is now claustrophobic |
thescribblerdragon chapter 4 . 1/10/2017 Ooohhhh please continue! |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 12/19/2016 Looks fun so far:-) |
dnsabhjbwihfj chapter 4 . 11/14/2016 I really hope you update! The suspense is killing me! |
Radiant Celestial Aura chapter 4 . 9/20/2016 Excellent story so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
weeny chapter 4 . 8/19/2016 omg i hope they all survive D: |
Eli Clark chapter 4 . 7/24/2016 What's with the songs? |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2016 This is probably redundant, but the song verses are kind of distracting. Besides those, have you considered using italics to separate languages rather than underlines? Or it you do underline, underline the whole sentence, not just the beginning and end. While the Japanese isn't terrible, most of us can't read it, and its disruptive to keep scrolling up and down for the translation. If you still want to keep the phonetics, why not just put the translation in parenthesis next to it? |
Sherlock's Pipe And Hat chapter 4 . 5/26/2016 You can't leave it there! It's been a while since you updated but I absolutely love this story and reaallly want to read more. So, pretty please, update? :-) |
Tenshi-Oujosama chapter 4 . 5/13/2016 That was too soon. Any chance for an update? Please. With cherry on top |
Daicar chapter 4 . 3/31/2016 wicked this is so amazing please keep going. i love storys like this |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/25/2016 Omg it's already 2016 UPDATE PLZZZ |