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nice work

Pervy sage would be die happy now if this happened to his apprentice

that was good keep the chapters coming

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well this was another great harem lemon story with 5 hot babes i am nowhere near the ending but i know who ends up with who and i have nothing against Hinata but i so wanted it to end up NaruSaku but oh well this was awesome

1 honest flaw tenten should be 20 years old is all unless there's a reason for her being the same age as most of the females

Absolutely great story I definitely like it's top quality, being harem and Tenten (favorite along Samui) being part of it, I'm hoping and looking forward to see you write a new naruto/hentai story or series cause there is not enough of them, I have read this story the day you posted it and added it in my favorites list but forgot to review it so I'm doing now which is the third time I'm reading this never boring great story.

HOTT! Loved it!

Great lemon story bro, i want more ;)

Since its summer make a naruto harem fanfic that has naruto judging a swimsuit/bikini contest with the girls being hinata, temari, konan, tayuya, kurenai, yugao, samui, mabui, tenten, and kin.

Just need to get this out of the way before I start my actually review: Kakashi and Anko? Blegh. Sorry, can't stand seeing Anko with other men other than Naruto. I blame the stories in where Anko is promiscuous while Naru has feelings for her and she is aware of them.

Now on to my review. Pretty interesting. The lemonade itself was really good. Conversations could've been a lot better though. Try to push away from using "said" and "asked" frequently when keeping long dialogue paragraphs. Also, don't make Naruto address every single girl in the room when a normal person would actually say "Your girls" or something of the like. It gets boring after the first time hearing: "Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Tenten, Temari" in one single sentence. Way too long.

Anyway, my personal recommendation to you my good sir is just expand on the many...verbs? that you can use when expressing dialogue, sentences and statements. Like say, mumble, stuttered, hummed, expressed, laughed, stated, questioned or exclaimed. Lots better than just keeping it limited to said and asked. Welp, good luck with your future fics.
Really enjoyed the story, thanks!

This fic has made me very pleased. Your Naruto is one lucky basterd...what I wouldnt do to get my hands on Temari-chan *eyes roll back and starts drooling*

My disappointment in the ending wasn't the pairings, but the lack of development and lack of fulfilling conclusions. How did Naruto end up with Hinata when they barely had 15/700 chapters worth of direct interaction? (I refuse to watch "The Last" because I hear they butcher Naruto's past and personality).

How did Sasuke get Sakura? (Even Kishimoto says he doesn't know how.)

What about the Hyuuga Clan? His promise to Neji to unite it into one branch! We hear nothing about that!

Also...what happened to Anko?!

Kishimoto said in an interview that women who don't stay with their first love are "terrible" and "to be pitied".

I'm not a woman and I find that offensive!

Nice, and PERFECT release date:)