I know this is from a while ago, but I loved this story so much that I couldn't help but comment now. I love the deeper, darker side of Bree-in the show, I feel like they could and should show that side of her more often. This is so good, and I'm keeping a lookout for the update of the sequel!

Wow, intense ending! I was not expecting that ending at all. I mean, I kind of knew that Bree wouldn't turn back to the good side, but I wasn't expecting that she'd be willing to go after her own father! And killing that scientist...wow, this is a very deep side of Bree. I really loved this story, it kept me on edge the whole time. I hope you do make a sequel! :)

Sad :.( But very well written :) I think the saddest part is that Bree is, in a way, doing the 'right thing' in stopping the experimenting, but not going about it the right way. *winces*

Saw your pic. Pretty nice :) I really enjoy reading your blog posts. You make me laugh XD

Great dark fic! Best Monster fic I've seen yet :)

Yes I want a sequel! Please! *puppy dog eyes activate!*

I WILL WHISPER BIRD YOU IF THERE IS NO SEQUEL. I DESIRE A SEQUEL.
I was shocked at quite a few points, but I loved all the twists and turns. If there's a sequel, I'd love more of the other teens- Jax, Viviana, and Bailey.
Have you seen the Bionic Action Hero Promo? It made me think of the, well, Disney XD version of this story.

Whoa! That's crazy, Bree! What are you doing?! Anyway, this was really good, and sad. I feel bad for Adam and Chase, and even a little for Bree. Yes, Bree. I feel like 'Whisper Bird' killed her. Like, they're almost not the same person. Yes, I NEED a sequel! What's going to happen to Bree?! Is she just, evil now?! Well, this was some amazing work, and I look forward to reading your next project!

I CANT CONTAIN THIS INFORMATION! SOBBBB!
You make me hate Bree...
:'(
I can't believe that you would write the ending like this! I want a sequel! NOW WRITE IT FOR ME! Jk

I'm excited, shocked, and disturbed. And I did enjoy it. Wow! Bree is really evil! :O
A sequel would be awesome. As much as Evil Bree has been fun, I hope she realizes her mistakes and goes back on the team as the Bree we all know and love! I want her to go back to her family! I want her to be a bionic hero again! :D
The encounter with Adam and Chase was pretty epic though. Totally awesome!
No . . . Bree wouldn't actually kill Mr. Davenport, would she? . . . She would. Man! Bree is really evil! I can't wait to see what happens next!

OMG THIS IS UNIQUE. I had never read something so dark but it's amazing! You really need to make a sequel! You can't just left is like this!

Will she really kill Davenport? Will she go back to her family? Will she quit her powers? Will she stay forever in the dark side? SO MANY QUESTIONS OMG PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL

The confrontation was much... calmer than I expected, but I'm not surprised by how it turned out; I suppose that Bree regards her brothers as fellow and confused victims. And the sequel? I am very curious about how Bree might come around. Great job!

YES! a sequel! When she had her face hidden and killed a lot of people I thought, "she reminds me of The Winter Soldier." Idk if you know who he is . . . But anyway, the crossover was great! AH, Ive watched it three times. When Bree said Oliver reminded her of someone I said, "Sebastian, maybe?"

Great chapter! Dark (very dark), but great all the same.
Only one more chapter? YES! Definitely a two-shot sequel!
YES! Definitely excited! :)
Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Great chapter!
Yeah, I guess Leo would be a pretty good villain if he wanted to be. I bet if he did than he and Marcus would get along better...You know, if Marcus wasn't dead...I'm still upset about that...
I think the random girl might be a friend to Bree, but...
I loved Spider Island!
Doodly door, I'm off to read chapter four! (I love saying that) :)

Wow, I need to get on here more often. Great chapter!
Bree just killed someone...Defintiely a darker chapter, but I liked it.
Me and my sister used to torture our Barbies sometimes...Glad we weren't the only ones. :)
Doodly dee I'm off to read chapter three! (I'm an odd little kitty) :)

Man.. You make me HATE Bree! Thanks! I cant believe that she's doing this! Please update soon!