Sooooooooooooooo I know it's been like a year and a half since even the last review but I also wouldn't mind a story about how Jack died here 'cause it sounds angst filled and I'm a firm believer in torturing myself with infinite angsty feels and yours are my favorite. :) If not I am totally okay with that. The last thing I'd ever want is to stress you out with requests since your life is likely stressful enough and I'd much rather relieve stress than cause it. *gives cookies*

Way to kill my happy mood with a slap to the face.

In other words, very, VERY well done.

I think a second or third chapter is in order

Beautifully written oneshot!
I loved how this story starts rather sweet/nostalgic then subtly reveals the tragedy when only Rapunzel and Merida are left alone. Quite sad, but again amazingly written details and story overall. :)

Oh my god wow! That was seriously so beautiful and well written. I just can't put into words how lovely that was. Just beautiful.

Can you please write a story on how Jack died or something? Thanks for the great story!

SO SAD.

Whywhywhy would you write something like this

And yet I love it to bits
Great character analyses. I loved your portrayal of Jack. Perfect.

So sad, it make my throat choke up.

So beautiful... I'm almost about to cry...

That was sweet at first, and then bang! sadness came with a vengenous. It was so sweet and you made them out to be broken with comfort only in eachother and not heroes like everyone else writes.

The story and the writing and the details and the character bits like Rapunzel with her innocence... It was just beautiful. It really was. I'll definitely be reading this a lot more times to come.

The jacpunzie was sweet and so them. And the mericup was amazing.

AHHHH.

Holy mother of-that was- dang. That was touching, and heartfelt, beautiful

That was so good but so sad. The feels the feels yet I loved it!

*sobs* why did it have to be so nice in the beginning but end so sadly? It tore my heartstrings.

Oh gosh man this is super sad...! Kinda wish I knew what happened to Jack but snappity. That one hurt the feels for real. You have a good sense of writing and the jackunzel was good. ;)