I'd probably TRY and do the same as Asami and I would want to earn the trust of my beloved instead of just jumping them earn the love don't force it. pretty friggin funny that her parents are saying to Asami

I have NO complaints about 'Samis little private time (but I have a VERY perverted mindI'd suggest some dirty jokes maybe later on like "You suckNot according toyou like to suck quite a lotjust spit balled if it's too "offdon't use it). I can't help thinking about Toph and her outlook on being blind and how she'd regularly makes jokes about it herself with absolutely NO lead up but I'm not sure if that's how you wanna write Korra that way

fully agree with you in your A/N and I'm GREATLY enjoying this take this couple having bad anxiety myself and being bullied as a kid too I'm kinda loving this whole "coming out of the shell" and actually finding that one person who loves you as you faults and all

Pls write more sempai

WHOA thank you so much for updating! So worth the wait! Also, bless your spongebob references, I love them!

I'm a bit late to the LoK fandom, but wow, what a great story to start my journey out with! I hope to see more of this story soon! It's such a great premise!

THIS IS AMAZING!

Great story so far! Can’t wait for me!

Since you asked for constructive criticism, maybe tone down with the three dots? I get it means like some suspended time but sometimes I feel it excessive? Like i’ll read out loud and make the dialogues seem very unnatural. It doesn’t roll well :)

Anyways, great story so far can’t wait to read more!

More please I love the uniqueness of this story while still keeping the characters right

great looking forward to more

interesting im looking forward to more fluff

Why the hell did he hurt Asami ? I do not understand anything, I know he wanted to be protective with Korra, but does he have to do this with Asami ? I found it very horrible seriously, I did not like anything.

love it would like to read more.

Hahaha! I loved so much the teasing from Korra parents to Asami! (In my humble opinion I think it would have been better if the threat from Tonraq was the last thing he said to Asami before he leaves the room, but you are the writer). Also indeed Asami needs to get laid :P Keep up the good work and update asap!

OMG! The last 5 words! I can't stop laughing... Was it intentional to put in a Game of Thrones reference?

A part that kind of confused me... On what exactly would Asami test her Gag reflex of? Lmfao... Cause it doesn't sound female related (if you get what I mean).

I hope you update sooooonnnnn!