Reviews for A Taste of What You Paid For
WoodenStarfish chapter 3 . 7/14/2018
You write these characters very well, even better than the actual show imo. I hope u will continue this story one day.
Wind Paradox chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
And so the issues goes on more for little Marella and Kallus... keep up the emotional work my friend.
rozoe9 chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
Well well well. So that's how you want to play? Very well. Bring it. The Spam War continues...

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Guest chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
UM ESCUSE ME!? I DID NOT ASK FOR THESE EMOTIONS YOU ARE GIVING ME, N0 THANK YOU !
Cupcake chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
Child voice: This was amazing! :-)
Normal voice: I can't believe there's so little reviews this story is so detailed and so well written and such big vocabulary! The flow and the plot of the story is amazing! I hope to see another amazing chapter!
Wind Paradox chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
It is great to see Marcella witnessing the truth of what the Empire truly is. I really felt for her once she found out how her mother truly died and the cold truth of Kallus' hand in Maketh's murder.

It is really disheartening to read that Lothal is now a wasteland planet when the Empire scrapped its secret project on the planet. Those poor Lothal citizens and animals...
Wind Paradox chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Oh wow! Aren't you Conspiirator from tumblr? You'll most likely know me for giving the name Marvena for that Pau'an Human hybrid girl. : )

I want to say that this story got me hooked!
xMOVED chapter 2 . 7/3/2015
Well, that's a relief to hear that she didn't become the mixture of Tua's lethal stubbornness (not that she doesn't seem to be stubborn) (for now?!) and Kallus's...callousness to everyone in the surrounding area.

And to the preview, KALLUS I SWEAR TO GOD.

Looking forward to your next update! :)
sithling chapter 2 . 7/3/2015
i'm feeling it now mr. krabs
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
This is so detailed and so will written, this chapter was awesome! Finally this AU was written! Hope to see more bye!
rozoe9 chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Izzy that was awesome!
Claude Lawless chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Dammit, it's too early in the morning to get the feels, and yet here I am with this feely job so far! Your writing style is very haunting (in a good way) and your characterization is 100% on point. Consider me jealous, because I'm incapable of writing completely detached jerks like Kallus. I eagerly await the next installment!
caduceus4611 chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Well, that's that. Another story I'm hooked on.
The Delta 42 chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Tua died in 5 BBY, from what I have gathered from the story Marcella is 15 at the end of the chapter, meaning that the end of the chapter takes place in 10 ABY. Please correct me if I'm wrong.
Aky2 chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
haa esto como que me llego al alma y no puedo sacarlo... XD
MUY buena historia no puedo esperar a leer mass!
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