please update

The proposed harem list is weak. I mean, Rias and Irina? Where are Grayfia, Tiamat, loli Ophis, Gabriel, Rossweisse, and the most powerful of goddesses?

So… why doesn't Naruto just take Asia's and Issei's SGs away from them? Why would he allow the Devils to retain control of two of Heaven's creations?

Hmmmm, interesting turn of events. I had to read them all before placing a review. Keep it up for I look forward to the next chapter.

Please keep Updating. Your a God for making this awesome Story. keep up the Amazing work.

WTF This god was very poorly written in my opinion hahaha.

Not sure if I agree with adding Grayfia to the harem. Cuckolding seems like one of the worst things a man can do to another man. I don't think Sirzechs deserves that.
Anyway, dang...He made Ophis retreat. Good stuff. You don't see fights with her/he/it too often.

It started out good, I liked the premise. But then you have him get his ass whooped in the third chapter, I’m not that great of a writer but even I know that wasn’t a good move. You can’t just hype him up and go ahead and do that, no one wants to read that. I also feel that you’re trying to force the plot, it just doesn’t feel natural. I don’t understand why you’re trying to hype Akeno up. Why the hell does Naruto suddenly ‘feel’ like he was the one to teach her the lightning shit?

It’s frustrating because the setting is perfect but then you have all these other crap weighing it down so bad that even I want to stop reading.

DxD, while it has a terrible but hilarious MC also has Huge amounts of potential, the universe is huge. Maybe you should explore. It doesn’t have to ALWAYS have to be with the main cast. Stop trying to force it.

Btw Sirzechs wasn’t even born during the Great War, wtf are you one about? And who the hell told you Original Lucifer was on par with GOD? It’s common freaking sense. What the hell is wrong with you?

Who the fuck told you that OG Lucifer was on the same level as God? Boy you’re talking out of your ass. Dumb freak

You’re forcing it, seriously, i’m just gonna stop reading now. Boring as fuck.

like XDD

like XD

and yet another good story abandoned. Shame.
The worst thing that could happen to fanfiction reader - get notification that a good story is being updated after a long time... just to be pissed because author actually gave up, but what can you do. Time to look for something else to read.

Please update love this story

good chapter bro