Aww cute

With alternate ending I think about the stick.

AWWWWWWWWWW! I LOVE the alternate ending. Twins, that is so awesome! And it STILL tugged at me and made me tear up at the beginning of the chapter with them all fearing for Mercy because of needing to have a c-section.

I love the ending. The part with Leah was the perfect touch and I could see Mercy sending that picture. Thanks for the wonderful story.

Oh there is a god LOL I was so worried you were going to say there were complications and the baby didn't make it. That would have been soooo evil. I absolutely LOVED this and look forward to more of youer writing!

... oh my god, don't tell me there's a problem with the baby. You can't do that to them! Gah! This is soooo unfair, now I can't wait for the next update to know what's happened! That is so evil, evil I tell you.

Nnnooooo! The suspense is killing me here. Love this story, well done, I can't wait for more. Becki xx

AWWWW poor Adam! He is so freaked out, with good reason. Oh oh oh, I liked when you said that Bran still thinks of Mercy as his coyote, it made me think of what he said to Adam when he gave her away at their wedding "Pup, I give you that which is most precious to me, don't let her come to harm," it was an 'Awwww' moment in River Marked, definitely!

I love the way you keep leaving the chapters in a way that makes the reader want to come back and see what happens next.

YAY! Another update. I love the budding romance between Nicolette and Samuel, and he so needs a mate who won't die on him. Yup yup. Her reaction was cute, when she showed up and realized he had company and then was all O.o because he didn't let her leave.

YAY an update! LOL The only thing I would have done differently was put an AN with info about SeoHyun's fic in case anyone reading this hadn't read it yet. But I am so happy to see you have intertwined them that way.

Why cliffhanger why? Looking really good! Keep up the good work.

Awww.. body image is definitely something I can see Mercy having trouble with, given some of her past comments because of Honey. And she would definitely worry about Stefan if she didn't hear from him after several weeks.

Are you plotting a romance between Samuel and Nicolette?

I am thinking about getting rid of Ariana in some way with the one I have going in order to tie it into my other ones, but haven't fully decided on that yet.

I just found your story and it is absolutely amazing! Please update soon! :)

Awww! Thank you for the shout out! I am really enjoying this. I can see each chapter the dynamic is evolving and things are flowing well. My brain is still going 'Is the new wolf going to bring mischief?' LOL. I like that she's former military, that was a nice touch.

Oh, a new pack member, neat.. I hope that doesn't cause trouble for Adam and Mercy though _ That would suck LOL

Hope the wedding went great and you and your spouse get to enjoy some quality couple alone time!