Reviews for Clean
X.summergrey.X chapter 4 . 9/23/2015
this is one emotional moment between them. i dont know what else to say.
Natalie chapter 4 . 9/14/2015
I really love this story, inuyasha being an idiot again and I really like that miroku and songo are more protective of her, and I can't wait to see what sesshomaru will think off all this, I can't wait for the next chapter please up date soon, XD
Darknessdawns chapter 4 . 8/16/2015
Oh my gods! This story is amazing. You have done a wonderful job with the characters and the story is addictive. I can't wait to find out what happens. I was also wondering if you could let us know how much time has passed in the storyline. I know that this takes place after the cannon story, but I'm not sure how long after or how old Kagome and the others are at this time. Anyway thank you for writing this awesome story. I'm looking forward to your next update.
LadyCash chapter 4 . 7/26/2015
Hmmm, not sure how I feel about the angle here, but it's definitely interesting!
You write very well, and despite my dislike of K/S, I'm tempted to keep reading both b/c of that and just to see how you work it all out. :)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
It's a pretty good story. Although I'm surprised Miroku or Keade didn't insist that the well be sealed so that InuYasha couldn't ruin things or possibly make Kagome disappear. I hate to say it but they probably should have knocked him out and sealed it.
I am looking forward to Kagome being happy with Sesshoumaru though. I hope you have InuYasha learn his lesson rather harshly, he needs to.
AnimexBitchx chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
Absolutely love. The feels...the feels. Can't wait for another update, great work.
g2fan chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
More soon plz
Cat chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
That Jerk inuyasha
slvrphoenx chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
good update. i was so proud of Miroku for finally standing up for Kagome. I feel so bad for Kagome & Inuyasha but can't wait to see what happens next.
Kaasuten chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
It's so heartbreaking to watch such a strong heroine be weak but it's so characteristic of Kagome. She's been so strong for so long and Inuyasha is her one big weakness.

This makes me hate him though.

And intensifies my hatred of Kikyo.

I really hope you seal the well and close his door on her forever. But maybe that's just wishful thinking.

also I'm a bit confused: can Kagome still go home to her own time or not? Thanks for your time and keep writing! I'm hooked!
xXSakuraBlossomsXx chapter 3 . 7/10/2015
Ring makes everything better XD
slvrphoenx chapter 3 . 7/10/2015
love how Kagome ran into Rin and ended up braiding her hair. the conversation they had was so funny. looking forward to the next update.
Kaasuten chapter 3 . 7/10/2015
"All of the stuff that was making me super sad"... Great... I don't know if I'm excited or dreading this next chapter but I'm glad to hear it's coming out soon. This one was GREAT and I loved Rin :)
kaggybearr chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
I'm currently unable to access my account but when I do...I'm following you and your story along with favoriting you. but OMG OMG OMG OMG WOW THAT WAS POWERFUL. its hard to believe this is your first fic. I really like how this is going. You portrayed Kagome's pain perfectly, I can almost feel her pain as I read this. That ending line with the "i still exist"... damn. Please update! This story has so much potential!
slvrphoenx chapter 2 . 7/7/2015
omg this was an amazing chapter. i love how Kagome and the others are thinking about things. I can't wait for your next update to see what happens next.
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