This was a great and long chapter. The only thing that would have made it better would have been scene breaks. The only big booboo I saw was you had Voldie mention Malfoy and he's in hiding no longer with the dark mark.

I LOVE this story. It's like the second time I'm reading it.

When Remus visited Harry after Vernon attacked him and he met with Remus he called Phoenix Severus Telaki. It wasn't Sureves like you were hinting(?) at in this chapter. Just wondering about the name change.

I'm just curious. In this chapter near the top, after the ******* and beginning with For the next 2 hours... It's talking about teaching Dudley how to fly a broom. It stats that he was able to kick off and hover but lost his balance and fell off when trying to move forward. If he was a muggle would he be able to do that?

Great story I really love this one. In fact this is my second reading of it.

updateee soooon pleaseee

Sorry you never finished this ...

I’m in tears, to see Voldemort torture Harry like that. I had to skim it.

I know I said it before, but that is really evil!

That was evil

yes it was a cool ending.

I know it’s been YEARS but are you gonna update this story? :D

would love to see more of this story thx for posting it is really good

YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS AND FINISH. IT'S SUCH A GREAT STORY, SO SAD TO BE LEFT HANGING THIS WAY. I USUALLY DON'T READ LONG STORIES, BUT I GOT CAUGHT UP IN THIS ONE AND COULD NOT STOP. I REALLY HOPE YOU FINISH OR EVEN IF YOU FINISHED SOMEWHERE ELSE PLEASE POST IT. THANKS FOR THE GREAT READ UNFINISHED THOUGH IT MAY BE.

Will this be continued ever?

Please update/complete this story

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