interesting use of the first person here, implicitly talking about what the reader feels instead of roy

That's... deep. Kudos. But dang, the emotions in that one. Talk about a reality check for Roy. Side note, totally see the whole practically raised Ed thing. -JKK

Your portrayal of Ed and Roy's relationship was done from an interesting perspective, and considering that Ed was only mentioned for a couple of paragraphs, I'd say you nailed it. As for the rest of it, Mustang would try to take all of the guilt on himself, wouldn't he?

Very well written. I'm glad I stuck with it. I don't usually read angst, but this might fit better under hurt/comfort, given the beautiful ending.
God bless!

My heart is done! You tore it out and reminded me how much I love everyone in FMA, such tortured souls as they are.

I miss your fanfics! So glad you're still writing. Why second point of view? I remembered you always wrote third. And you nailed down the PTSD- so horrifying yet, tragic. And knowig hawkeye is so understanding despite what he had done to her TT_TT Ed was definitely a life saver here. Glad you had put him in. And I forgot that they would named the baby Maes. I thought they would name him Ed xD