lol nice

I liked the story. It was cute and interesting too. The only bad thing I have to point out is that you made mistakes with Mako's Tsunami name, since it's Mako, not Mecho. Other than that, the story was very good.

aww that was kawaii!

Mecho isn't that good looking...he's so buff lol

Very nice _ hee hee, Ryou getting stolen away by Malik was a nice touch ~_

*giggle* aw, sweet one shot ;)

Cute!

*!*!*Hey there!*!*!
Wowie, aw...it was soo fluffy! I love fluff! Huh..if only there was more setoxjoey fanfics out there! I think you would be EXCELLENT at making a PURE joeyxseto fic with lots of fluff and minor lemon/lime! You should try! IF YOU DO, YOU HAVE TO contact me! If you don't, I think I will like die! This fic is so cute..ah! I can't explain!
One VERY minor problemo...
At the very end, the last couple of paragraphs, you put 'where' instead or 'were'. Common mistake!
Anways, ExCeLLEnT sToRy!
Keep on writing,
Ja Hun _

Awesome! I just love all of yr stories, and this is no exception.

Aww... cute. How cute. Not bad. Just a few missused words here and there, but overall kawaii _. Nice work.

Aw.

Yes the Mako thing was great.

*giggles* ...never thought of it that way when I was watching...*hm*

Anyways, loved it.

Aww, this was absolutely adorable! I adore Christmas fics and I adore fluffy fics, so of course I was going to love this. The idea of Mako having a crush on Yugi makes me giggle and squee at the same time, while I felt so sorry for poor Jounouchi having both Bandit Keith *and* Rex Raptor eyeing him up. Oh yes, and trying to avoid Mai at the same time ::laughs::

One of the things that cracks me up about Kaiba is the fact that he can be so immature sometimes, especially when it comes to Jounouchi, even though he's a very intelligent, wise-beyond-his-years teenage boy. He's still a human being even though he tries so hard to hide it and he still has his faults and failings, which is only part of what makes him such an interesting character. You manage to capture this extremely well, even though this fic is just short and sweet and fluffy.

I can easily see him getting jealous and possessive and I can also see that sort of thing driving Jounouchi absolutely up the wall, but they still manage to work things out in the end. Well, Kaiba even goes so far as to apologise, which is a pretty big thing for him. You've managed to soften him up a little, yet still keep him fairly in character and I applaud you for it.

I knew there was a reason that you're one of my latest favourite authors! _

that was so great! '.~ plz continue soon!

WOW! You should do a sequel to this! It, was very cute.

Hi! Don’t ask me why I decided to read a Christmas of all fics but, *shrugs* I did AND very much enjoyed it. Ahh, so cute. Thanks! Oh, and also I wanted to comment on how PERFECT Seto’s dialect was… at least before his, yay Jou, which we all love. But I mean it. For example, you had him say, “Well, as you can clearly see I’m fine”. By adding ‘clearly’ you kinda mock the person you’re talking to and belittle them, not only that but it just sounds so Kaibaish. I just thought it was worth mentioning. I’ve only just started reading Jou/Kaiba’s and you’re the first to actually give him comments you can actually hear him say with his cold commanding (great) voice.

WE! so much Joey n Seto fluff! Great one shot!

DM