I enjoyed this! :)

Awww, I love Thranduil in your fic so much. Also, I'm suspecting that Miron is going to make an attempt on Legolas's life and blame Saeldur. It's frustrating because Saeldur is just... not a smart person, but he thinks he is lol. Poor guy.

Another nice chapter! I'm so interested to see where this all goes!

Another great chapter! I love your idea of Thranduil, though I wouldn't mind seeing more of his hard edges too

So... as much as I love Saeldur as a character, I really, really dislike him as a person. This chapter was beautifully written. Can't wait to read more!

Oh boy, this is going to get intense. I'm not one hundred percent clear on what Miron was trying to do but I'm excited to see what happens next!

oooh, the tension is certainly building!

And still the plot thickens. All the twists and turns. It's so intrinsic. Well done indeed!

you have written a series of stories, which have very good plots. However, it was extremely difficult to find which story followed the other, as you did not placed them or spoke about them in the correct order. It was difficult to find out what happened next, after each cliff hanger.

Great story, looking forward to the rest of the arc. :)

I feel a bit stupid now. I had more faith in Calathiel than to think she was TRYING to provoke someone. My mistake, apparently!

Norgalad speaking fourteen times amused me.
Dramatic at that last bit! Calathiel isn't the most tactful, is she?

I hope you do continue this arc. I love your stories!

Update, please? It's very interesting! :)

OHHHH it was good! I hope you will update fast!
Calathiel was just a little pest, i hope she will be punished. Seriously her brother doesn't deserve it