it took you eleven chapters to get to the point? I like the concept really, but boy did you have to make it sooo slow paced? that said, I find fascinating the idea of vampires being more than glorified zombies

Oh wow, great update. Really enjoying this fic, it's so in depth and well it's just amazing. Loving everything so far, looking forward to the next update! Much love!

This was my favourite chapter so far! I could picture Michael Sheen as Aro so clearly with Jasper, it was a little scary!

If I were going after them, the first vampire I would get rid of is Chelsea. I mean someone has been planning this for decades then Bella arrives and all of a sudden, Chelsea is making obvious mistake after mistake making herself a suspect. Why? Could it be the actual culprit has decided to ramp up their plans and Chelsea must go in order to cause chaos. It has to be a setup or else it makes no sense that she would suddenly grow so careless.

Enjoying it so much!

For a moment there I thought Bella and Chelsea would get caught by Caius... How awkward. I get that if there were guards, Caius would have sent them away, but why would Chelsea and Bella be allowed to go there anyways. I imagine Chelsea wouldn't be allowed to use her power on the coven unless the order came from Aro himself. Afton seems so pathetic, and it would be fun to explore why he is like that. Is he just so used to hide behind Chelsea? And what does she think of him? Certainly she would wish he wasn't such a nuisance. Nobody would ever dare mock her, but it would still be better for her to have a higher-ranking mate.

In all the fics I have read, Gianna almost always dies, so I wonder what will happen here. This story continues to delight and surprise me so I remain cautiously optimistic!

Quem será o companheiro de Bella? será o filho de Caius?

This story just keeps getting more interesting as it goes on.

Aw, it's so sad Alice and Jasper aren't staying with each other out of love :( I wonder who else stays close because of that. I would imagine mates could only become closer after time. They don't have the same conflicts that arises in human relationships after all.

I'm looking forwards to see if Bella also will come to learn more about Afton and if she'll resent him too. I can imagine Bella's horror when she finds out that Felix is only stringing that poor woman along. Makes ya wonder if Felix actually has no feelings or sympathy for any of them. What would he do if he actually met his mate that way.

Poor Carlisle

Amazing

Excellent

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Loved it!