You should probably give up writing if this is the best you can do.

I am so lost, it's not even funny. I give up. Time to go read something else.

I think his is where I stated getting confused like ch 17

This story was... good I guess compared to other stories I just didn't really get it after the first 6 chapters

? j'ai pas compris.

C'est fou.

... I'm Confused

Love the way Gohan is described

Woah, speechleeesssssss

Oh come oooonnnnnn I was wondering how they would get togetherrrrrrr pleeeeeaaaaassseee at least let them have little moments...
. Awwwwwwww man I'm bummed out... and the day before school starts again... T-T :'(

Just to give you fair warning your going to have a lot of piss off Gohan and Videl fans now. On that note this is your story not theirs and beside this is an fanfiction site anyway the story in way in anyone wants it to go. Here idea for story if you want it:
journal/Here-the-outline-of-story-for-Videl-cheated-582823482
Yes I'm dracoforce7 under deviantart site. So to let you know I'm still Gohan and Videl fan of them. Nice story.

Just an fair warning your going to have some piss off Gohan And Videl fans now on you.
So to let you know I like Gohan And Videl together on most stories. But take a look at this if you want to under deviantart because dracoforce7 there:
journal/Here-the-outline-of-story-for-Videl-cheated-582823482
This is fan fiction site so don't let those people push you around.

A or gohan and his cousin

Hmmm...interesting! Maybe have the trouble four defeat him with Gohan's help?

Gohan should fight and beat Kalimar