Missing your story :( Hope your doing well and hope you continue writing soon. I’m also curious how Yugi’s life at the servant quarters are like besides Yugi trying to get Atem to soften up and solve why there is a darkness surrounding Atem and how to stop it.

What a fantastic story! Can’t wait to see what happen next! :D

I love this story. Please update soon.

Hi! I really miss this story. Please update soon, even if it is a short one.

Yes, I’m so excited you updated and it was such a good read XD It was lucky that Yugi met a Priest willing to help free him from being Prince Atem’s personal servant and also give him a suitable role in the palace. So happy the Priests finally gave Prince Atem a scolding. Hopefully, the Priests will continue to help Yugi as the story continues. I felt sad for Yugi when Sensiobe and Ramose didn’t bother accepting Yugi’s apology especially when he told them everything was fine and no one was receiving any punishment. Looks like we’ll see Atem continue to get more darker and more of being a jerk as the story continues. Wondering if Priest Set and/or Priest Aknadin will cause trouble for Yugi later on in the story?

And this was the moment, when Yugi knew - he fucked up.

Hi! Can I just say, I love - love - LOVE this story? Honestly, I began early in the morning and now it's almost midnight. I've been reading your story for 12 hours! The plot is amazing, the dialogue is amazing, the pacing is amazing - I love everything. Honestly I was at the edge of my seat on that duel with Atem. You're so good. I haven't read any fanfic that I got hooked so quickly. I really hope you do update soon, because I cannot wait anymore. Lots of love. I can literally see from chapter 1 to 23 how much you've improved. Even though you edit and re-edit. It's just... amazing. Great job. :)

Well, this is certainly an interesting take on the Pharaoh's story. So apparently Atem is evil, or something evil had taken a hold of him. Yugi's got his work cut out for him. I'm looking forward to see how Yugi will handle the Prince, and how (if) they become friends. I also enjoy seeing how Yugi handles himself in Ancient Egypt.

I love this the beginning it was weard to me that Atem was so wicked.,but its so poor kind of reminds me of season 0.I cant wait for next to read you soon.

This fic REALLY took off after chapter 14, and I have been loving the ride! Thank you so much for your dedication over the years. I look forward to the next update, whenever that may be. :)

Wow, great characterization in this chapter! Their interactions all felt real; it was really fun to read how it played out (/)/

Since people mistake Yugi for Atem, I had imagined Atem to be a similar age to Yugi. But since Yugi is at university, so must be around 19/20, and Atem is not yet fourteen, I'm surprised they think Yugi is him! That's at least a five year age difference, which, at that age, is going to be a big difference in appearance. But apart from that discrepancy, I thought the chapter was good - another twist in Yugi's adventure.

Why's Ramosa sounds soo...blase now? What did Yugi do to make him so uncaring?

What gem I have stumbled a is such an amazing story and I thoroughly enjoyed it.I look forward to the next update.

did the little prince think he saw a monster? is that why he was freaking out and threw rocks at his mom?