I loved reading this story! So sweet! Thanks for writing/sharing!

Oh , this is almost too funny. A fierce hobbit mother getting dwarves to fear her. She's very good. I really like this version of Belladonna.

I love the ending.

I love snow! But I really enjoyed the fact that Bilbo always sneezes at the start of winter.

You've got a good story here. I can tell that English isn't your first language. I completely admire anyone who writes and posts in languages that aren't their native tongue. I think it would help you, though, if you got a beta. There were places where I couldn't quite understand what you were trying to say. A good beta will help you polish the story, and increase your readers' enjoyment and your English skills. Keep writing!

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Love it! It would be awesome to read a sequel a year or decade later!

I've enjoyed reading this story and hate to see it end. I was smiling as I read Bungo and Belladonna's letter to Thorin. Glad to see the Primula has help after Drogo's death and Frodo's birth. Primula being Fili's one was a added surprise.

Love your work! Can't wait to see what happens next! Love it!

I have loved this since I started reading it just this morning. It is amazing

Esta historia me encanta.

Hahahahaha. Thank you for the update

EYYYYYYY LOOKS AMAZING

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Me encanta un Bilbo borracho no se lee todos los días y que sea el Uno de Thorin es muy lindo.