This is GREAT! Honestly, I think it's fine, and you should continue down this path! :D

Hey! Sorry for taking so long, I checked it out as soon as I could. It's a fun and cool story! May I suggest adding a short paragraph about why Natsu got into Lucy's bed? I would totally love to know and it would totally help quiet down my inner fan girl (who is currently squealing by the way), to settle down. Keep up the good work and have fun with you're story! I hope to hear from you soon!
-Black

MIRA IS COMING!
this is really great you need to continue because i really need my tablespoon of Gajevy;)

More plz love this

(n it won't let me write the n)
awesomenesssenessssss i like it it is cute

Not bad for your first time, good job

This is very cute and very great, I love it! One little mistake that I have to point out is that you wrote two instead of too when you explain Lisanna's conversation. Other then that brilliant!

HECK YEAH this is really cool you're great at romance;) can't wait for the next installment