Reviews for The deal
joyndoug97 chapter 25 . 5/16
Such a great juxtaposition of the flashbacks to the present day. Such different reasons for the panic attacks. I’m glad Zelena has someone to support her, hopefully she can stop obsessing.
Andrea Nike chapter 25 . 5/16
I love this chapter! I mean the beginning and the end are a little (a lot) heartbreaking but the central part with Robin and Regin talking is AMAZING!

The part where Marian asked Robin to marry her is terrible, not because it's bad (on the contrary) but because she's trying in every way to make sure Robin will stay with her even if he doesn't really want, like she's trapping him. And Robin just said 'yes' with that condition... It makes me so angry that he didn't really fight for Regina's and his life together.

I'm not really sure how fair is that Robin asking Regina to be his plus one at Marian's wedding. I understand why Robin needs to go, there's Roland, but it can't be easy for Regina. After all Marian contributed to ruin her life even if Robin had a huge responsibility about that too.

I really hope Zelena won't do something stupid and leave Regina and Robin alone and I really hope Walsh will be able to help her.

And the ring scene? It was so beautiful and sweet!
I mean poor Robin when he said all of that to Regina, he opened his heart, his wishes for the future with her and she run out of the flat. But then Regina come back and pull out that ring and gives it to him with that explanation, it's so sweet!

Mal is the kind of friend everyone deserves, who would do anything to make sure you happy. She's amazing.

I can't wait to read more about their life, about their love story, how Mal will react about the ring's story, how Marian's wedding will be for Regina, about Zelena. Yes well, I'm curious about a lot of things!
MJRL chapter 25 . 5/12
This chapter was heartbreaking and sweet.

Poor Regina! But I cannot feel the same sympathy for Robin (sorry but I still cannot understand how someone can do what he did)

However, they are overcoming the past and looking towards the future. I think that to start becoming a family, they have to leave what happened in the past. I believe that Robin has more insecurities or fear to lose Regina because he was the one who left her in the past and maybe he is afraid to lose her.

Great chapter!
Hopias chapter 25 . 5/12
Oh my god. This fic has got to me in a different level. Like the amount of happiness, romance, and angst balancing each other out as the chapters go by. It’s perfection. Thank you so much for writing!
Sabdy632 chapter 25 . 5/11
Ohhhhh that was soo..i dont have words..but i just love it and plss update soon i want more
MJRL chapter 24 . 3/5
I love Madelyn. Although, she could not keep her promise and help Regina be happy, until she got back together with Robin, and I realized that Madelyn's wishes to Robin neither came true because he got a kind of happiness when Roland was born and now he has Regina too. He really got it all.

John is a good friend.

I love your writing so much. You make me feel different emotions through these characters.
TheEvilQueenie chapter 24 . 1/16
Please update soon! I love this story soo much!
Andrea Nike chapter 24 . 1/5
you break a piece of heart every time you update a chapter and I read flashback but I'm so happy you update! I love madelyn, she's amazing, where I have to sign to have a friend like her? I'm a bit worried about what zelina could do; no I'm really worried about zelena. I can't wait to read more, more about the past, more about the present and more about the future, more about madelyn, more about their relationship, and also more about zelena. I'm really really curious to read more about everything!
joyndoug97 chapter 24 . 1/3
Oof - Mal is a very loyal friend! The way she told Robin off back when he broke up with Regina was something else! No wonder it meant so much to him when she agreed to let him try and reconnect with Regina. It’s so nice to see them so happy now in contrast to the flashbacks. Zelena gives me the creeps and has me worried.
WhitmanFrostFiend chapter 24 . 1/3
FAVORITE CHAPTER EVER.
Rory Kaye chapter 23 . 11/6/2019
Awesomeness! So good
Andrea Nike chapter 23 . 11/6/2019
I'm so glad you update. the beginning and the end of the chapter broke my heart, I love the part about their date and jealous Robin but I'm a bit worried (a lot worried) about zelina. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
joyndoug97 chapter 23 . 11/5/2019
Yay! What a wonderful date! They have so much fun, flirty chemistry now that the tension and nerves are gone. Zelena’s worrying me a bit... the flashbacks were heartbreaking.
Andrea Nike chapter 22 . 7/6/2019
you broke my heart at the beginning of the chapter, fixed in the middle and the broke again in the end! you're cruel! just kidding, the middle part was really sweet and the beginning and the end heartbreaking. but now I really need to read more: that "we need to talk" is killing me. I'm really glad for the update abe I can't wait to read the next chapter!
joyndoug97 chapter 22 . 7/5/2019
The flash back was heart breaking, poor Regina! Present day was great, I love Roland - he’s so cute!
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