Reviews for TP: Jack's curse (revamped)
heises834 chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
Das ist wie Robot chicken jack ist das Huhn und Knock out der Verrückte Wissenschaftler
The Emotionless Swordsman chapter 9 . 11/16/2017
I love this story! This is like the third time I've read it, and it's still just as good and interesting! Plz update, and when you do, plz PM me b/c my notifications don't work.
BLOOD DARKLING chapter 9 . 7/19/2017
Keep up the great work
GhostFang GF chapter 9 . 7/10/2017
I think I've come up with a new villain that would be perfect to go up against Super Jack. PM me if you want details.
draco7347 chapter 9 . 7/5/2017
really love this awesome story cant wait for brand new chapters
Razerwolf81 chapter 7 . 3/8/2017
Update soon
ThePhenoix11 chapter 7 . 11/20/2016
Kinda meh good luck moving forward.
Kaleia chapter 7 . 8/15/2016
Like I said before. Jack has a very strong will! He takes the pain like a boss! The nanobots are so cool to. Give him all that... A Technorganic vampire huh? Wow. At least he can still eat human foods! And the medic kit thing he has is cool to!

Great job!
Fake Account dammit chapter 2 . 8/14/2016
Yo, I understand that you said you might make grammar mistakes, but c'mon. There are far too many minor misspellings that it was impossible to not comment on. Many words have added letters or are missing them, same goes for the ends of sentences. Try to stick with third person as it is the most flexible of the two popular perspectives. I apologize if this is a harsh criticism, but I'm trying to make it
Kaleia chapter 6 . 8/6/2016
*vomits* uuuughh! Good God almighty! Thoughs damned cons! How dare they did that to Jack! (Most likely you Knockout! You sicko!)

Jack ya still a bad ass! You have a very strong will. Very!

Great job though.
Kaleia chapter 5 . 8/3/2016
Jackson Darby you are one bad ass mofo! Bad assery! You look so cool!

Great job!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2016
Great chapter but are you ever going to update TP: Jacks secret at all please update this and that story as soon as you can
Kaleia chapter 4 . 8/2/2016
Been awhile! Good to see ya back!

Ah. There he is. We all know whoes that huh?

Great job!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2016
Great story can't wait for more, but when are you going to update Jack's Secret?
Hivedragon chapter 4 . 8/2/2016
Nice
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