Reviews for You are Beautiful |
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![]() ![]() Still love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwe.. That's soo cute! Made me cry.. *sniff* Ron.. Never really like him, but now i can tolerate him. To be unloved and all that.. he remind me of Kyo (Fruit Basket) when the monster part with the mirror, but glad to say this is one brilliant fiction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwh *sniff* that was so beautiful! ja ne!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() a great story a great ending i absolutely loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() D that was so sad! but i loved it poor Ron the books would be nothing without him! lolz but you did a fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() a truly great story i am so happy that ron and harry got together in the end and i think you did a wonderful job, your a really good writer i hope you plan to write another story soon - |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was sad then happy... I liked it. Nice job. |
![]() ![]() hello! I want to tell you that your story is wonderful. I think that the first part is much better than the added ones. I also think that your mastery of English is fabulous, especially in part 1. I am a language student, and I could only tell that you were not a native English-speaker in a couple of places. It has to do with your syntax with verbs, and the conjunctions that sometimes go with them. I could not tell you were a French-speaker, only that you spoke a language that was vaguely Romance. Also, your ideas were very creative, and your writing very artistic and very fluent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really liked the story. i always thought ron was taken for greanted. I really liked how you put in the momnets from the other bookd into this one. I also liked how u included everybody (ginny, twins, Her) i thought they should have been there at the end too though but it still nded very good. thanks for the great read. |
![]() ![]() I loved the last part! Please write a sequel(with extra fluff)! |
![]() ![]() You hate Draco Malfoy almost as much as I do! KAWAII! 'Life is not what I thought it was twenty-four hours ago.' |
![]() ![]() How sad! You are such a good author! 'I am the second man now...' |
![]() ![]() Good ending! I |
![]() ![]() "And your raising the dead in me..." How lovely poetic! "I'm not who I thought I was twenty-four hours ago..." |
![]() ![]() Yes yes, four parts! Oh, oh, I am the second man now..."- Twenty-Four, Switchfoot |