Reviews for Bright side of the Eclipse
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
This is one my favorite fanfics! Ive reread it a few times over the years!
Vtl chapter 33 . 7/16
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Starfish20 chapter 25 . 7/3
These past few chapters was intense. There were times as I was reading that I was holding my breath in anticipation for what's to come. Brief review of chapters 21-25.

Chapter 21
I've just realized that you kept the focus on Itachi and Miyuki's relationship which I'm thankful for. There's great balance between the main and supporting characters which is no small feat. Many writers tend to include the whole Naruto fandom (go overboard). Oh and by the way Miyuki's fantasy was hilarious.

Chapter 22
I love the characters you created Ryusei, Isamu, Sumiko, and the balding Uchiha. They all bring something to the table. Isamu and all of his self-diagnosed illnesses is like a breath of fresh air and Sumiko wanting to find a mate for her summon was so sweet. There were also some touching moments in this chapter that I enjoyed.

Chapter 23
Even though I knew it was gonna happen sooner or later I was still saddened by his death. The part written in italics nearly brought tears to my eyes.

Chapter 24
Why are there tears in my eyes? My heart hurts for everyone involved even those pesky Uchiha elders, even Fugaku.

Chapter 25
Poor Sasuke, I'm happy that Miyuki keeps him company and her grandmother(Shocked face). I can't wait to find out the reason behind her change of behavior. I'd give Kishimoto all of my money for him to release a picture of Kakashi w/o his mask. SIKE! I am curious to what is underneath it though. KISAME (Raises hand in celebration) ITACHI"S BACK.
Starfish20 chapter 20 . 7/3
So, to avoid the constant notifications I've decided to read a few chapters then leave a review (summary lol) of my thoughts. I must say that your writing has definitely improved from the first chapter. (Not that it wasn't great to begin with.) You have a way with words and you're able to convey emotion which not many are able to. Did I mention this is one of the best written stories I've read on on this site and I've read many.

Chapter 17
Sasuke was too cute. I read his and Miyuki's interaction with a smile on my face the entire time. As you continue with this story I can see growth in both Miyuki and Itachi's character as well.

Chapter 18
Your fighting scenes are on another level. LOVED every minute of it.

Chapter 19
Things are heating up between my two favorite characters. (Smiling emoji)

Chapter 20
Yay! She did it. She deserves all the praise given all the hard work she put in to accomplish her goal three days before the deadline. She one of my all time OC's and I'm not saying that to say it. I really mean it. ... THEY KISSED! (excited)

Thank you for all the time and effort put into writing this story. I greatly appreciate it.
Starfish20 chapter 15 . 7/3
Itachi's wish for peace struck something within me as I read it.
Starfish20 chapter 13 . 7/3
These past few chapters you have been on a roll. Thumbs up!
Starfish20 chapter 12 . 7/3
This was amazing, I love the potential love triangle going on between Ryusei, Hana, ad Shisui. I can definitely understand where Miyuki is coming from with her not growing and loved the chemistry between her and Itachi. Mikoto and Sasuke is always a pleasure to read as well.
Starfish20 chapter 11 . 7/3
Loved every minute of reading this chapter.
Starfish20 chapter 10 . 7/3
Uh, I could imagine Fugaku's expression and I take back what I said about Miyuki's progress in the previous review. I loved that Miyuki questioned the ways of a ninja and maybe in the future can take up medical ninjutsu. :)
Starfish20 chapter 9 . 7/3
I enjoy the back and forth between Hana and Ryusei and I am beginning to look forward to them in the upcoming chapters. The fight between Itachi and Miyuki was kind of reaching if I were to be sincere. Itachi being a prodigy, it was somewhat hard to imagine Miyuki landing a hit on him even if caught off guard but that's just my view. One reason is, after becoming a chunnin at age ten he later went on to joining ANBU at age 11. There's no way that Miyuki could/should have progressed as much as she did to be able to go hand to hand with Itachi after him getting serious.

Other than that another, a thumbs up from me.
Starfish20 chapter 8 . 7/3
I appreciate the quotes that you use to begin every chapter.

OMG, I felt so embarrassed for Miyuki and Ryusei, how could Hana just blurt out their weaknesses like that. Yes!, this is the Itachi I love. Unbothered, indifferent, quiet, and aware (fangirling).

The fight between Miyuki's team and Shisui's was Intense and well written. Though I found it hard to believe that a bite from a pup would snap someone out of Shisui's genjutsu. I think he was known for having one of the strongest genjutsu's among the Uchiha.

One of my favorite chapters, I was so into it.
Starfish20 chapter 7 . 7/3
I really like this story. I love the plot and your style of writing a lot. I do kind of wished that the pace of the story was unhurried and that there was more buildup to Miyuki accomplishing a goal.
Starfish20 chapter 6 . 7/3
I think in this chapter you captured Itachi's personality well. I think that Shikaku is a great fit for Miyuki and her teammates. I also know that I'm late when it comes to giving advice but Miyuki does not need to become super powerful to challenge Itachi's skill (my opinion). She comes from a clan know for their wisdom. She can use that wisdom to her advantage should she and him ever battle. :(

Best of luck. :) Stay and be safe.
Starfish20 chapter 5 . 7/2
I actually did not see that coming. :( If I were to nitpick, there was one instance where you referred to Miyuki's grandmother as "his".
Starfish20 chapter 4 . 7/2
No, complaints here.
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