oh, would love to read more please!

Lol, this is like a knife to the back xD It's so sad, seeing them so close yet so far... thanks for writing though, very nicely done!

Why on earth would you make this a one-shot?! OH THE PAIN. It hurts so muuuuuch. I need them to be together. Amazing writing by the way, completely captured how they are and it was beautiful.

Oh this was so beautiful and so painful. I can just see them suffering like this next season. I love the show and am excited to see where it takes us next. Your story was very powerful and moving. I want to compliment you on how well you presented the characters. The angst was truly deep and heartfelt. Please keep writing about this incredible and exciting couple who have to be endgame...they totally sizzle...

be still my aching heart...
this reads like i could be watching it. awesome writing! please update?

Wow I loved this. You captured the characters beautifully and the timeline made perfect sense. Please write a chapter 2 I would love to see this continue.

Your writing's great, but sorting through all the broken code is a chore, and it was really hard to get into the story. Clean it up and I'll give it a proper read? :)