This is a very interesting premise I can't wait to read more.

HAKYONA PLEASE. MAKE IT YONA FALLING IMLOVE WITH HAK. LOL

Oh snap that last sentence just got me so hooked.

well...that's a twist

Not that it's important to the story, but Anastasia is Fox not Disney. I love that movie and now that you mention it I do see the resemblance to AnY. Rhough Dimitri's not nearly as cool as Hak :-) Keep writing.

Hehe, you write better than me and that's that I'm a beginner to.

Nuuuuuuu I wanna see Yona's transformation in action!
Anybody else reminded of Fruits Basket?

O.o Um... What was that...
Anyway please continue this story! I'll be supporting this and your other stories!
AOD: Monkey, I think... Definitely relates to the story. .-.

Horse here! -

Oh my god i love your style please finish as soon as possible this is amazing!

I loved Hak's laugh and the "You Got rejected". That's so him xD I am a bit disappointed on Yona's reaction. She should have been more shocked to the point she could even think this was a joke. She didn't doubted that he wanted her as his wife. A normal commoner would have questioned the situation more, at least in her thoughts. Something like "Why me out of all the girls he could choose? He could easily find a more graceful, educated, beautiful, noble candidate from a rich family to be his wife. You cannot blame me when I think this is hard to believe! Is he making fun of me?". Also it is strange that after hearing Hak's name, she calls him by it in the narration. Why refer to him so familiarly if he is a stranger? She also started to call Suwon by his name out of nowhere. Where did "His Highness" go? Those small details are important to make the characters believable in my opinion. How the pace of the story is going, Suwon just seems pretty creepy to me, especially complimenting her hair and grabbing it all of a sudden. All of these are very easy fixable things. I am waiting for the next chapter! I think this story is pretty cool.

This looks interesting! Im guessing you will explain why the proposal was so out of the blue haha. I'll keep reading! Such a great idea for a fic.

This AU is interesting. I like it. Also if I may, I think you can correct some little things: 1. Be more descriptive of the scene and feelings of the character. I find it really hard to believe that Yona want shocked to Suwon's proposal and if your intention was that, it wasn't noticeable. A paragraph sayingWhy me out of all people he could get? He's a prince. Royalty. He could get whoever he wants. From rich, noble to beautiful dames...Why me? Is he making fun of me?or something like that. 2. Be consistent in your writing and don't forget the honorifics or titles. With this I mean that Yona became too familiar with Suwon and Hak way too quickly even if it was only her thoughts/narration. At some point she refers to them with their names only instead of terms that express distance since she clearly doesn't know or have any relationship with them in this story. 3. Take a time to review your grammar. There are some repeated words and pronoun mistakes. Silly stuff that make a difference. I am looking forward to you next update. This story has a lot of potential! Keep it on!

PLEASE update soon! This is fairly interesting

Still. Veeeery rushed... still curiously awaiting the real reason behind So-woon's proposal so please update soon! But there might be a good idea to check your tenses and some grammar...