Reviews for Under the Stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, is that the end? I want more! It would be cool beans. |
![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() Pls update this is amazing |
![]() ![]() This is amazing please update soon |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed the story until this chapters ending, I felt as though the build up for everything was great but the aftermath was too fast paced as someone who had a similar experience as this it made the illusion crumble and make it seem as though a 12 year old wrote this based off their small knowledge of actual relationships |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the update hope to see more, love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww o.o ahhhhhhhhhhh lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see rubys plan worked but wonder what will happen now update soon |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, please for the love of all things cute and cuddly, update this soon, or ill start crying, right now, i can feel he tears, pls pls plsplsplspslspslsl, its do cute and adorable and i want to see how it ends! You captured the feelings super well! Everythings is very discriptive and you use good vocabulary! This is a quality fic, i absolutely love it, please continue. |
![]() ![]() This is sooo good! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, I just read all the chapters... This story is amazing! I'm loving the way you're developing their relationship, keep up the good work! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that went well lol update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hhhhhhhh Can't wait for the next chapter This story is absolutely wonderful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another awesome chapter update soon |