; ( Rikon is going dark ; (

Stannis did Not kill any Starks. Where did Rikon get that foolish idea ?

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Not bad I really like this story. Don't listen to other people reviews. Just do what you think is good. There are just as many people who like this story than hate it. Keep up with the good work.

I guess this crap is the reason GRRM disapproves of ASOIAF fanfiction.

Not a Bad read but you rely too much on magic... :) Otherwise good read as i said..

Sansa should have her married dissolved and returned North after everything is done and marry into a Northern family instead of constantly looking south for brides.

So that is it? We don't know what happened in the Riverlands or what they learn from Sansa's arrival at Winterfell, or what happens in the North. We are left with him only gaining victory over the White's and the Children but there are many more issues to worry over from the south and the Dragons. Is this just the first part and if so will we get a sequel.

Good chapter and have to wonder who the man with Lady Stonehart was, could it have been Harwin? I think her being the one to kill Jaime was poetic since she was the one o mess up and set him free to begin with. Then e have the Blackfish leading the Riverlands troops to gain some vengeance. It seems that there are a fair few heading to assist Sansa in the Vale. Interesting.

Osha and rickon is okay but why is Melisandre think rickon is in leagues with the great other

Yeah, the Blackfish! I love the Blackfish! And Lady Stoneheart!
Does Brynden know about Lady Stoneheart and who she is? I mean, he does have an informer from the Brotherhood, so they are on the same side ... Poor Jamie ... and Brienne is still captive. I hope Stoneheart does not hurt her ...

It looks like Stannis has been defeated and taken prisoner, and Rickon made his move now with might and magic. I did not expect him to raise the dead among the fallen troops from both sides but still awesome. Looks like Roose Bolton is next after Ramsay's dead. Will the Freys suffer the same fate for Robb's betrayal and murder at the Red Wedding?

Well I would say you don't mess with Rickon. That was quite the feat that the young King has done and to level the field between him and Night's King and I should be very interesting. Very interesting indeed.

Badass

Eh roose your time is coming to a end and rickon using the dead to fight his enemies was unexpected but hey using different tactics will leave your foes confused and I see what u are trying say about the children of the forest