Esme didn't unleash Edward, what a pile of bullshit

Funny how Edward said that he never went home and never talked to Carlisle and esme again...but now hes saying that he did and lived with them sometimes.

PICK ONE, geez you cant even keep your story straight.

And who is the girl who jasper showed up with at the cullens if not alice? Since alice is human and friends with bella.

Funny how blood tastes bad now that he has met bella but he calls no issue to fucking anything that moves.

How does a vampire cheat on their mates? Amazing

Ewww does Edward fuck every time he feeds? Geez hes gotta be the biggest whore on the face of the planet. He might even make the Denali cumdumpsters look virginal if that's the case.

Chapter 1 gave me a horrible first impression of Edward, what a skank. And an even worse one of bella, could she be anymore EASY? And she had no thoughts for the girl that Edward DROPPED to the fucking ground. She didn't even care that his dick was still wet...she was gonna fuck him anyway. DISGUSTING.

Just for your information...this is a very sure way to get STDS!

Really good

You know the story is bad when you don't care if Edward or bella die. And I don't.

You have done NOTHING to endear the main characters to the reader. No reason at all for me to care about them or what happens to them. This story is horrible.

Edwhore KILLS Bella and while she's changing she fucking asks about him? What a pathetic fucking bitch!

All these vampires around and their just going to let Edward be alone with the girl? That seems fucking odd doesn't it. Seems that Esme and Carlisle are pieces of shit in this story just like Edward and bella. Just a bunch of douche canoes.

So Edward manipulates girls into having sex with him (using his vampire allure and getting them drunk) then kills them all because hes a jealous little boy? LOL

And Bella, could she be a bigger whore? I fucking doubt it. Edward is a threat to her fucking life and shes walking around with wet pants shes so turned on by it? Victim much?

Bella let him have sex with her WITHOUT A CONDOM?! SHE WATCHED HIM FUCK SOME GIRL IN A ALLEY WITHOUT A CONDOM JUST A FEW DAYS AGO!
What a dumb fucking bitch.

Why wont bella give it up now? She was gonna give it up without even knowing him AT ALL...RIGHT AFTER HE FUCKED SOMEONE. So why not now? She feel like a slut? Cause she is. Only now shes also a cock tease.

So he meets Bella and what their not mates? He cant stop thinking about her blood but he can still fuck other girls apparently. So I'm guessing their not mates in this story.

Ok so does he do this every night? cause its been two days and hes had two girls. Does he really have to feed EVERY day? if so LOL shit that's one used up dick. He left Carlisle in 1921 I'm guessing its modern times now right? so one a day that's over 27,000 girls hes slept with. Ya that's not gross at all.

"id have her and there was nothing she could do about it" Edward sounds like a rapist instead of a slut.

So Bella sees Edward having unprotected sex with someone in an alley and thinks ohhhhh I call next? She would really allow some dude to pull a train? Seriously?

Wow, I have zero respect for bella. And even less for Edward. What a nasty fucking skank.